Sunnyanddinostomp

This is really good :) I especially liked the bit where you find out the main character was a robot. There are still lots of things I want to know ...

Thanks, I'm glad you enjoyed it

Thanks for the review- this was really helpful :)

thanks for the reveiw

thanks for the reveiw

Thanks a lot for the review. It was really helpful and I will definitely take into account what you have suggested :)

Thanks for the review!

thanks for the reveiw. I'm really glad you liked it.

I love this. It seems to flow so naturally and has a real rhythm to it.

ok, that makes sense