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Re: Undercover Princess
Okay wow... that was fantastic to read! I loved this whole story and how much world building you were able to put in a rather short story! The only thing ...
Mar 10, 2021 -
Re: The African Tale
Okay this story was very cute and fun to read but I do have a couple critiques. 1) when stating the number of things you used actually numbers such as ...
Mar 10, 2021 -
Re: When Time Stands Still
So I really liked this story but I do have few things I would like to say about it none of this is ment for hate I just want to ...
Feb 18, 2021 -
Re: Encouragement
Okay I really liked this for a couple reasons. one being it was short but I really think it told a story that was sadly true because I think people ...
Feb 16, 2021 -
Re: Nature and love
Wow just wow this was fantastic! in just a few words you had me moved this was fantastic you really show emotion and the way everything is said is just ...
Feb 13, 2021 -
Re: Among Us
okay this was a fun story to read and I don't mean any of this to be rude but I do think that if had added some actions to it ...
Jan 30, 2021 -
Re: You Got Me A Book
soI liked this story for the most part but there are a couple things I would like to share "However, down by my house, the flowers were blooming and mornings ...
Jan 23, 2021 -
Re: The Chronicles of Carina: Tales from the Brain Farm [Part 1]
okay this was a fun story but I do have a couple questions. so are these people all human or are they zombies of some kind but civil? and is ...
Jan 23, 2021 -
Re: It's No Fun Being A Saint
Okay I can not explain how amazing this is! the way you wrote and the way they spoke was perfect! I love the line “I hope you burn in hell,” ...
Jan 23, 2021 -
Re: Bye
So this was a great poem and one with a definet story. now I do have one question who on earth is JD (at first I thought it was the ...
Jan 22, 2021 -
Re: Broken Souls and Promises Part 1/2
this was a good story I really liked it. I think the line "Besides, aren't tears what make you value happiness? Isn't darkness what makes you appreciate the light?" is ...
Jan 22, 2021 -
Re: Ricochet
This was a lovely story and I would love context to it because it seems like it has a greater story. to say the least it was true I agree ...
Jan 22, 2021 -
Re: The Choosing Room
I like this story it is great. this story is great cause it shows how twisted are veiws can get just by following along like everyone else. Also I wonder ...
Jan 22, 2021 -
Re: Becoming the Big Bad Wolf
This story was fantastic in so many ways. it shows how someone who meant well could be twisted by there own imagination. I love the twist I didn't see it ...
Jan 22, 2021 -
Re: Limited - Short story set in a twisted future America.
This was a great story by all means! it was short but it really told a full story and I loved the line "Am I weak for missing my friend?" ...
Jan 22, 2021