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Re: Transcendental Numbers
Haha, I knew it would be compared to the Fault in Our Stars at some point. Really, if I had any influence, I would compare it more to Chuck Palahniuk's ...
Jul 23, 2016 -
Re: Love Him
Praise the Spaghetti Monster! PRAISE!
Jul 22, 2016 -
Re: Black Lives Matter
A note: I do find it somewhat intriguing that works titled "Blue Lives Matter" and "Black Lives Matter" both stand in the literary spotlight as we speak, but aren't opposing ...
Jul 21, 2016 -
Re: Cheap Cigarettes
Wow, that was overwhelmingly positive and very constructive. Not that the rest of them weren't like that, but now I know the storys' strengths specifically, which is surprisingly rare--it's great ...
Jul 21, 2016 -
Re: Cheap Cigarettes
Thanks for the review! I thought the "I didn't think I'd need it" line would've suggested more strongly about the main characters' past attempts at abstinence, but then again the ...
Jul 20, 2016 -
Re: Cheap Cigarettes
Oh no no its fine. I've been told to do this a couple of times by teachers too, but apparently its not required in certain cases. Thanks for the review!
Jul 20, 2016 -
Re: Cheap Cigarettes
Thanks for the review. I think it might be a good idea to fill in some of the blanks (such as how did he murder his sister specifically, the nature ...
Jul 19, 2016 -
Re: Cheap Cigarettes
Thanks!
Jul 19, 2016 -
Re: Cheap Cigarettes
Thanks for the review! I agree, I should probably change the cashier's line. Also, I really didn't notice how contradictory the second sentence is, so thanks for that. The last ...
Jul 19, 2016 -
Re: Ruby of Revenge [Part 4]
Oh yes, of course.
Jul 14, 2016 -
Re: Out of the Rain
Making my review now, but can I say that your names are so perfect together okay sorry for being a creep gonna review now
Jun 30, 2016 -
Re: 1. Differences
Can I be brutally, bluntly, and completely honest? I understand if the main character is just telling us what she's seen. But the way she's saying it, she's saying it ...
Jun 27, 2016 -
Re: Divine Intervention: Chapter Five
yay
Jun 27, 2016 -
Re: Divine Intervention: Chapter Five
Thanks for the review!
Jun 27, 2016 -
Re: Divine Intervention: Chapter Five
because i have been shooing people away with the force of my charisma
Jun 27, 2016
