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Sujana

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  • Short Story » Dramatic, General Re: Transcendental Numbers

    Haha, I knew it would be compared to the Fault in Our Stars at some point. Really, if I had any influence, I would compare it more to Chuck Palahniuk's ...

    Jul 23, 2016
  • Poetry » Spiritual, Realistic Re: Love Him

    Praise the Spaghetti Monster! PRAISE!

    Jul 22, 2016
  • Other » Politics, Realistic Re: Black Lives Matter

    A note: I do find it somewhat intriguing that works titled "Blue Lives Matter" and "Black Lives Matter" both stand in the literary spotlight as we speak, but aren't opposing ...

    Jul 21, 2016
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Cheap Cigarettes

    Wow, that was overwhelmingly positive and very constructive. Not that the rest of them weren't like that, but now I know the storys' strengths specifically, which is surprisingly rare--it's great ...

    Jul 21, 2016
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Cheap Cigarettes

    Thanks for the review! I thought the "I didn't think I'd need it" line would've suggested more strongly about the main characters' past attempts at abstinence, but then again the ...

    Jul 20, 2016
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Cheap Cigarettes

    Oh no no its fine. I've been told to do this a couple of times by teachers too, but apparently its not required in certain cases. Thanks for the review!

    Jul 20, 2016
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Cheap Cigarettes

    Thanks for the review. I think it might be a good idea to fill in some of the blanks (such as how did he murder his sister specifically, the nature ...

    Jul 19, 2016
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Cheap Cigarettes

    Thanks!

    Jul 19, 2016
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Cheap Cigarettes

    Thanks for the review! I agree, I should probably change the cashier's line. Also, I really didn't notice how contradictory the second sentence is, so thanks for that. The last ...

    Jul 19, 2016
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Mystery / Suspense Re: Ruby of Revenge [Part 4]

    Oh yes, of course.

    Jul 14, 2016
  • Short Story » General, Realistic Re: Out of the Rain

    Making my review now, but can I say that your names are so perfect together okay sorry for being a creep gonna review now

    Jun 30, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Other, Dramatic Re: 1. Differences

    Can I be brutally, bluntly, and completely honest? I understand if the main character is just telling us what she's seen. But the way she's saying it, she's saying it ...

    Jun 27, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Divine Intervention: Chapter Five

    yay

    Jun 27, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Divine Intervention: Chapter Five

    Thanks for the review!

    Jun 27, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Divine Intervention: Chapter Five

    because i have been shooing people away with the force of my charisma

    Jun 27, 2016


The capacity of human beings to bore one another seems to be vastly greater than that of any other animal.
— H. L. Mencken