Sujana

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What a peculiar story, what a strange execution. I think you can sharpen this to some extent, in order to make it more coherent, because from what I've read I ...

Thats actually a pretty good explanation of it. That disgusting pedophile is pretty brave, though, trusting the girl to not shoot him with the guns s/he purchased. And how did ...

Entirely up to the author. It could work either way really.

Oh, well this was a surprise. Hello again, Lizzy. I've always wondered if any of my works would make Catholics angry--my subconscious seems to be determined to do two things, ...

Cliche is subjective, I think. I've seen the art vs industry topic a lot, which is why its personally a little overdone for me, but I can understand if others ...

Also, I'm sorry if I touched upon a very sensitive topic for you. I didnt mean to make you uncomfortable, so I apologize if I did.

I understand your rage. Its a very touchy subject, and often can lead to a lot of suffering if handled badly--my church once told me that it wasn't good for ...

As far as I'm aware, suicide usually earns a person damnation according to most churches. I thought that was why she decided to kill herself.

Not a review, that's for later, but I'd just like to say--you missed the perfect opportunity to say "Rachel thought I had gone to hell, and she wanted to come ...

Aw, thank you. And yes, I was pondering on that aha moment problem the whole time, I nearly scrapped the story because of it. Your suggestion is actually quite helpful, ...

Thank you for the advice. This is currently in my "Dump" list and I doubt I'll ever come back to it, but if I ever do I'll definitely have your ...

Thank you for the review. Yeah, I've been questioning the dialogue choice myself as well--might just replace it with normal quotations later on. Thanks for the suggestion.

Thank you for the review! I'll try to improve on the description department.

...I just came here for review day, man. I thought you were my friend, what happened?

Ah, yes, that makes sense. I just thought it was a poem for all the social outcasts of the world. Also, happy review day. Are you doing well?