Sujana

Hello there, TMI. It's Ellstar here for Review Day (and thank God there's a bit of a bustle about, huh?) So let's get started on this short story, shall we? ...

Ah, how I've missed you, Tigeraye. There are very few writers on this site who I genuinely enjoy reading from, and you're in that list. It's not that your prose ...

Hello, Myteacherforcedmeto (I'm sure they did, but that's alright, it's their job to). I'm going to review this short story for a moment, so without further ado, let's dive into ...

This'll be the last review I'm sending in for now, because I have to address the rest of the green room after this. I'll come back some time later, or ...

Good day, Felistia. I've finally gotten around to reading the first chapter of your book, and while I did find it amusing, it started off very shakily for me. While ...

I know you're probably sick of hearing this now, but show don't tell is a very important part of the writing process. Duh. But no, there's a very good reason ...

Ooh, song pieces. These are always fun to do, it's like a reimagined music video. Anyway, while I did like the idea of this work, I think it could be ...

Hey there, Song. Let's start this review, we both know what we're doing here. This wasn't a particularly notable chapter to me, at first, mostly because it was incredibly infodumpy. ...

Hello! I thought I'd begin my daily run around through the green room with your work, and as far as I'm aware I'm glad. This was a very good opinion ...

Hello Rose! This is Elliot, though most people here call me Ellbae, Elmo, Ellstar, Ellmist, or Complete and Utter Psychopath, depending on how well they've gotten to know me. Welcome ...

I do agree with Aley on how calm this chapter is compared to the chapter before, but I see it as more a breather episode than anything trying to be ...

While I understand how the point system might lead to difficulty on this site, and how some people might forget that, on this site, several of the site users take ...

Hey there, Song. I know you're still on your little excursion at the time of this writing, which is fine, but I just thought I might throw my little tidbits ...

Forgive me for my empty comment, that was a bit of a mistake on my part. Now, onto the actual review. Let's see if we can't bring this out of ...

Honestly, I don't quite like storylines like this. It's not that I don't like women going against the norm--I know that many places still have this perception of women, and ...