StupidSoup

:O wow. First i should introduce myself. I am (according to my friend fictional) a sentient being of numerical value, aren't i lucky? Anyway forward march to the review! First ...

ok fictional (i got your name right :D) let me recollect my brain and try to puzzle my way through this big poem of defiling. First off have you been ...

Um...ah, er...what? im confused so i should probably introduce myself. Im the guy you will see who commented on your other story that you wrote a couple of days, weeks, ...

Heya watsurface

Heya wateverurnameis

Wow. This is a very emotional piece. I like the way you explained all your emotions in the note on the tissue though i do have a couple of things ...

This was a very good story! I liked how you repeated yourself to show suspense and how you showed the back story. It all went so smoothly! I like how ...

Hello Silverlock! I really liked your story. I liked the way you showed your conflict by listing all the girls weights, very creative! I also like how you show her ...