Streamfrost

I really liked this. It was kind of sad, and definitely made me feel of lost love. I agree with the fact that you should try and make this into ...

I absolutely LOVED them! They were all amazing! I agree with the above comments on the little grammatical corrects, however. But the imagery was phenominal! Personally, my favorite piece was ...

I liked this A LOT. Great piece of work. The only thing that I would suggest to work on would be rhythm. Just wasn't feeling it :/. My suggestion: see ...

I like this alot! It made me feel happy inside, like I too was reminiscing on my childhood :). Great job! What I especially liked was the fact that you ...

I really liked this Lofty. The amnesia thing is a great idea. If you were planning to do a novel with this, I would have her remember bits and pieces ...

This was amazing. The introduction was phenominal! The grammar, however, was a little sketchy. I was confused when the text read "Never forget that I care about you, okay, baby ...

I really enjoyed this, but the rhythym could use some work. It was smooth in the beginning, but when you got to "the sky, which was once laughing" things got ...