StoryWeaver13

Welcome to the site! So when you enter stories here, it's usually a good idea to see how the format turns out - in this case it's pretty much one ...

I liked this a lot; it was really traditional which I usually don't dig because, you know, it's been done (hence the traditional). But this felt different. It felt patriotic ...

If I'm too young to know "I love you," Then I believe I've found my age. Okay, so I get what you're saying but I don't quite get what you're ...

Well I thought this was pretty good. It was sweet in a weird sort of way; I've got to say though, I can't remember much about the Calypso myth, so ...

I really liked this. It was simple, yet beyond the skin-deep free verse it was a structure collaborating your simplest emotions with truly deep and meaningful ideas. I think this ...

I don't know, this just didn't quite work for me. I felt like the lines shouldn't have been so uneven, as well as extending this to tell more details of ...

I actually like the concept of this. I'm sorry, I don't usually review lyrics so I'm probably pretty bad at this, but I like to write music also and the ...

You're in my heart so strong and steady, like a butterfly in the meadow, or like a cat with a mouse, I have this feeling like I cant, < Don't ...

Today I stood at King's Cross station , Between platforms nine and ten, my palm pressed against the stone, praying it'd let me in. Fans are all the same. A ...

Well I thought that this was an interesting piece, although I'm not completely sure I understood the main point of it. Nonetheless it was very well-written, and it allowed a ...

You reviewed something of mine earlier, I do believe! Thanks. :D BUT, that doesn't mean I'm going to be any easier on you. This was alright, but I felt like ...

Okay, I thought this was really good. It was just powerful, every line of it, and it was almost compelling. I usually don't like such strict styles of rhyming because ...

You won’t tell me you 're upset because I might think you 're strange. That is the way it is, the way it has always been. This is a good ...

I actually found this pretty interesting. Jent's right, it was in a way a rambling narration, and yet it was dry and I personally loved the descriptions that were given ...

Hey psudiname. :D This was definitely an interesting start, and I'm itching to read the next chapter if you decide to continue. My one thought that gives me an edge ...