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Re: Professor Morgenstern
Oohhh, I love this kind of writing! :D Simple yet clever wording, a subtle flow and rhythm of words, and a witty, sad, and somehow pleasant tone throughout. Is this ...
Sep 17, 2011 -
Re: Blood and chocolates
Welcome to the site! So when you enter stories here, it's usually a good idea to see how the format turns out - in this case it's pretty much one ...
Sep 12, 2011 -
Re: The Blue Boy
I liked this a lot; it was really traditional which I usually don't dig because, you know, it's been done (hence the traditional). But this felt different. It felt patriotic ...
Sep 10, 2011 -
Re: Again with the love thing...
If I'm too young to know "I love you," Then I believe I've found my age. Okay, so I get what you're saying but I don't quite get what you're ...
Sep 7, 2011 -
Re: Calypso
Well I thought this was pretty good. It was sweet in a weird sort of way; I've got to say though, I can't remember much about the Calypso myth, so ...
Sep 7, 2011 -
Re: Where the Clouds Go
I really liked this. It was simple, yet beyond the skin-deep free verse it was a structure collaborating your simplest emotions with truly deep and meaningful ideas. I think this ...
Sep 6, 2011 -
Re: Destroyed Wedding Day
I don't know, this just didn't quite work for me. I felt like the lines shouldn't have been so uneven, as well as extending this to tell more details of ...
Sep 6, 2011 -
Re: At A Crossroad
I actually like the concept of this. I'm sorry, I don't usually review lyrics so I'm probably pretty bad at this, but I like to write music also and the ...
Sep 6, 2011 -
Re: Missing You
You're in my heart so strong and steady, like a butterfly in the meadow, or like a cat with a mouse, I have this feeling like I cant, < Don't ...
Sep 6, 2011 -
Re: Ode to The Hallows
Today I stood at King's Cross station , Between platforms nine and ten, my palm pressed against the stone, praying it'd let me in. Fans are all the same. A ...
Sep 2, 2011 -
Re: Breaking With Her.
Well I thought that this was an interesting piece, although I'm not completely sure I understood the main point of it. Nonetheless it was very well-written, and it allowed a ...
Aug 30, 2011 -
Re: The Dark Thing
You reviewed something of mine earlier, I do believe! Thanks. :D BUT, that doesn't mean I'm going to be any easier on you. This was alright, but I felt like ...
Aug 30, 2011 -
Re: Fire's Escape
Okay, I thought this was really good. It was just powerful, every line of it, and it was almost compelling. I usually don't like such strict styles of rhyming because ...
Aug 30, 2011 -
Re: Cry
You won’t tell me you 're upset because I might think you 're strange. That is the way it is, the way it has always been. This is a good ...
Aug 29, 2011 -
Re: Ghost Towns and Kansas City, MO
I actually found this pretty interesting. Jent's right, it was in a way a rambling narration, and yet it was dry and I personally loved the descriptions that were given ...
Aug 27, 2011
