StoryWeaver13

Wow, this definitely related to me personally, even though I'm only a junior. I mean, I think a lot of people can relate, even when they aren't at the same ...

Basically I thought this had kind of an interesting idea, particularly because usually poems tend to be the reverse of this (ie. "Don't be fooled by my smile, I'm miserable ...

I feel like I'm missing something because of the way it doesn't completely begin or completely end with the first and last sentences (part of the writing exercise?) Like why ...

I feel as though I should applaud, or possibly bow to your mighty awesomeness. Okay, a little dramatic, but this poem is honestly amazing. And this is a terrible review, ...

Wow, I really liked this. I have a couple typical issues with amateur rhyming poetry (not that I'm calling you "amateur," but like the rest of us young and a ...

I'm actually going to disagree a little with the first reviewer and say that I wouldn't capitalize it! She's right, usually lack of capitalization doesn't work at all in poetry, ...

Well even though I'm reading and reviewing this through my phone I actually liked reading about your hipster character here. XD Is this continued? It felt like just the beginning, ...

I am only one of billions with beliefs of millions. But can he see me? I am only a fruitless tree, yet I receive his love. I am not a ...

This was pretty cool! I definitely felt like there was more of a vintage feel during the beginning rather than the end, however, and there were a few points where ...

I thought this was really good! I'm no hockey watcher but I read the Wiki information and I've got to say that I felt like rooting for him too. XD ...

I thought this was really good. :D It's hard to talk about depression and suicidal thoughts and make it unique from all the other poetry of the same theme, but ...

I actually thought this was really well-written. Overall, this was a really good piece; I loved the way you explained your main character, it made us really sympathize with her ...

I actually really liked this. It was interesting, especially the first part. There was something really compelling about the fact that there were no quotation marks when they were communicating; ...

*Warning: I'm in a nitpicky mood, so I might tear this apart. Don't worry though, it doesn't mean I don't like your story. It's just that I really want to ...

Hey Blue. :D This was soo short, but soo cute! I'm not kidding, I just...love this. I know, it's only four lines, but they're four lines of epicness. Maybe this ...