Storm_Bringer

Hello! Thanks for posting in my thread. ^^ So, onto the review. Nitpicks! There were only a few, good job! I knew that this boy would say something rude Why? ...

Hiya Forever!!! Thanks for posting in my thread. ^^ I haven't gotten a reply in a while. Sorry this took a long time. Harsh??? I doubt it. You're a good ...

Aww, Peanut. You don't really feel that way do you? So. Is this a poem or just a piece? 'Cause it didn't sound like a poem to me. :wink: This ...

Hello! ^^ Welcome to YWS!!! Good job on the two reviews!! Onto the critique. Paragraphs - Currently its just one big paragraph. You should split it up. - It would ...

Hello! Welcome to YWS!! I would have spelled out your name but it is very long... Is it perhaps a stanza from Edgar Allen Poe's The Raven? It reminds me ...

Hello GroundHog!!! Welcome to YWS!!! Some things: -For every post you must do two reviews. That's YWS 2:1 ratio. -Make a post in the Welcome Forum to be explained all ...

Helllo Pozoe! Welcome to YWS!!! A few things, because you are new: - Rate your work! This should be a PG 13 or R. - For every post you must ...

Hello! ^_^ Nice story you have here. I think its coming along, but a few things: -For every post do two reviews. You only have three and this is your ...

Hello Alice Rose! Welcome to YWS!!! Some things: -For every port you must review two other works. That's YWS 2:1 ratio. -Make a post in the welcome forum for all ...

Hello Dan! Welcome aboard. Sorry I didn't review your others but I'll do this one. ^_^ Hmmm, so first thing is: :arrow: Dialogue Punctuation! You seem to have problems with ...

Hello. Nice story. You could shorten up the chapters a bit though. It would make it easier to read. Nice start. The quote was good. I think... That instead of ...

Hello! Welcome to YWS!!!!!!!!!! I shall review your story today. :D I did catch a few nitpicks. So that first. Nitpicks!!!!!! closed the door on the tea party as she ...

Hello! Welcome to YWS!!!!!!! if ya don't like the size, please tell me how i could accomplish the same effect with out it You could always use different POV's in ...

Hello! Welcome to YWS!!!!!!!!! This was a good idea, with the shape-shifters and all, but it didn't seem very prologue-ish to me. Perhaps make this the first chapter, and explain ...

Hello! Nice poem you have here! I love the idea, and it sounded great!!! It reminded me as a folklore or an ancient myth or something from a story. ^_^ ...