Stori

Not a bad piece, but there are some errors. A material that was now forbidden to be produced. This here is a bit unwieldy. Try making it a part of ...

Hey, Hero, this was great. I did have one little problem with it, though. Towards the end you started to tell it like a history book: just the facts. Because ...

Hello there, Chetan. I'll just help you with a few errors. He is fast on his path as extreme speed of a car. In his way he studies position of ...

Hello Forest, here I am. the words were out of my mouth before I could stop them. Don't forget to capitalize "the." In the second paragraph, I just think you ...

Hi Aless, thought I'd help you out. In the first sentence, you forgot to put in an end mark. Then in the last sentence before the main text you missed ...

Hey, Dakota! I found a few errors here. The night was young but cold, the last rays of the sun had disappeared only an hour ago, yet it was pitch ...

*chuckles* Would you like some critique now? Central Ohio’s best real estate agent, Commas tend to travel in pairs, you know. I picked the paper up and unravelll it. Change ...

Hello Arris! I couldn't help but notice you had a couple of errors to do with the characters' swords. pulling my sword out from the hilt and in front of ...

You certainly are in a flutter! Sorry about the bad joke. But your story has a very rushed feeling, as if one's supposed to read it all in one breath. ...

Autistic fellow here. Actually, I hate crowds. Anything more than ten people, and I freak out. I will run outside, clam up or refuse to speak to others at all. ...

This sounds a bit like me. Hm. I don't tend to curse out loud unless I'm really distressed. However, I do have a tendency to make involuntary movements. (I.e. if ...

The Secret of NIMH. This story is by Patrick C. O'Brien. Bascially the plot is about a farm community of rats, mice and other animals. Unfortunately the folks at MGM ...

Is this based on the "Shadow of the Colossus" game? You had a very few errors, which I'll take a minute to point out. He had awoken This is all ...

Is this a nonfiction piece? Just asking. The only real journey I ever went on I didn’t go anywhere. Comma after on. It makes the writing flow better, see? the ...

Hello there. I too enjoyed reading this part. The one error I wanted to point out was that in dialog, usually you want to use a comma after the spoken ...