StoneHeart

Hrm. Okay, thanks for that last hint, very helpful! About the ellipses, I know that I overuse them, but if you must know I'm not misusing them. Ever read Harry ...

Hey, you'd probably do a lot better if you posted this in the forums. Really, that's what the forums are for. I'd suggest the welcome mat (You're new enough and ...

Well, Jensen Link is kinda a super famous warrior . . . hard not to recognize. :D I'll explain more later! Thanks again!

Aye, I know . . . it's a big problem with me 'where' . . . 'were'? . . . :D But thanks!

;) it is a good chapter. :D

Hey, thanks for the review!

Tsk, I know . . . I looked up on article on quotation marks use and got the whole problem fixed! :D Thanks for the review!

I know what ya mean! Lol Good luck! (And I do reviews anytime! - Just ask if you want one).

XD< Check out my comment on Shadow's review! Thanks, the names take work! Love the review!

XD, check my comment on Shadow's review! Thanks.

Okay, yeah, I'm working on that problem! Thanks!

There'll be an explanation for these things later on. Understand that most of the problems and confusion here comes from the fact that I've done a LOT of planning on ...

Yeah, you are! Thanks for the review! I can see why the confusion is there . . .

Hey, thanks for the review! (Love the name). I'm working on it . . . this chapter is under editing!

Aye it was! The comma's are supposed to be there though. If you look, none of them are grammatically incorrectly placed! :D But thanks!