StoneHeart

^^ Thanks.

//sigh >.> You can be very annoying sometimes. I'll prove it to you . . . go and read that piece over. If you were reading a book would you ...

Are you stalking me? O.o And actually the last part wasn't even from me. It was from a writing course that I took. The guy who did it said that ...

^^ You stole my line! I'm workin' on those adverbs (* eats random adverb). Actually with a colon you can capitalize or not capitalize the letter that follows. I just ...

^^ I was planning to keep this 'ere piece a short story (For suspense). And the first person in a third person piece is the story teller. Think of me ...

^^ My 21 chapter book is my expanded writing. I decided I'd had enough expansions for now.

For the 'detail problem' you could really use to expand! :) It'd improve it I think!

Okay, I'll be fair and let you know that I intentionally made my theme hard to find. I suspect that only three people on the site could have ever found ...

^^ There is one. I'm just really vague. :) Thanks for the review. Feedback is always loved.

Hrm. No problem.

Thanks again! Helpful? Hell yeah! ~notimetocommentfurther~

Thanks for the review! Starting at chapter 20 can't help you, but you did quite well. I, apparently incorrectly, assumed my readers were smart enough to figure out that humans ...

Don't worry, looking back at it it makes me cringe too. Thanks, this was a quite helpful review!

Hey! Thanks for the review! Note that this is a first draft so the grammar mistakes will go away with reviewing only! Technically speaking this is really a quite small ...

Thanks for the review!