StoneHeart

Okay, so from what I get here Pook is like 'father' and Mook is like 'mother'? Like a social position? Right? It's just kinda hard to hold on to without ...

Okay, so another amazing chapter! Never change this style of yours, NEVER! It's amazing! Like the previous chapter, well paced with emotion, action, and description all wound beautifully in! However ...

Okay, I have one word for this: Intriguing! It was very, very interesting, and I think it's got the potential for originality! The most important thing to me. You are ...

Okay, so this was interesting, kinda hard to understand what was going on, but interesting none the less! 73? Nice age for a character, you don't run into many that ...

Okay, so this was interesting, and, as far as I know, unique. Your names/words are a bit hard for an English speaker to get out, but they're very, very interesting! ...

I know people like this person. People who live their lives like this, night after night, day after day. Actually, to tell the truth, most people down in this dinky ...

Okay, so this was interesting! Why must I run into so many great stories this morning?! This is the fourth! It's amazing! Anyway, this is a bit slow for a ...

Okay, so this was great. This morning for some reason I'm running into GREAT story after GREAT story! This one is up there with the best! Your grammar is exemplary, ...

Okay, this was great. There were very, very few mistakes, your description was great, your idea seemed great! But if there was one problem, it was in that your story ...

Okay, so this was well written AND interesting. Sadly though it is apparently not original! But good work, this was well written, I've read fan fictions for computer games (The ...

Okay, so this is good, I get the point you have here! It's great! I like stories with a point! They have a twist that others don't, they have something ...

All right, no wonder you wanted this deleted. :) One paragraph is a bit short for a discussion on Sri Lanka! Maybe this would fit better in one of the ...

Okay, so this is an interesting story with miserable grammar! Don't let that put you down, grammar is important in writing, but being able to write well is a LOT ...

Madness, it's sad. . . . I love it how this story has a meaning too it, it isn't just a story with a plot that makes you feel all ...

Okay, impressive poem here, very impacting and . . . interesting. Personally I cannot put this poem in better words than Cole has, but I'll at least back him up! ...