Stevie

Thank you everyone for criting! I made the changes to a copy on my computer. The first chapter should be up soon, I have it written I just need to ...

Here's Chapter Two! Hope you enjoy! Um... anything in Italics is translated and if there is anyone out there who speaks french check the french part for me I would ...

Thanks guys for the critics! Eleinasari - That is really helpful, thank you! I wrote this piece as a way to get rid of my writers block and to rewrite ...

Tzmanda - Glad you like it. Lilyy03 - Thanks for the help, I edited it and made the changes you suggested. (BTW the meaning of 'they' was supposed to be ...

Sounds more like ... Wisconsin. I lived in Illinois for a long time and I haven't seen as much corn as I do here in Wisconsin... Boring states. Nice Story. ...

J. Haux -- Thanks for the crit! Adam101 -- Actually Flynn is the main character's older brother. Thanks for the name comment ... wait until you hear the brother and ...

Thanks for the review... I actually have changed the story and it's edited a lot more then what's on there... but It's pretty much the same thing. but yeah thanks!

all the mistakes and grammer problems can be changed but the writing was exelent , the story was ok be honest the plot was cra..bad , you should have wrote ...

They don't... Erin is the first name and Skye is her middle name... it plays some part later in the story. Kingsley is there last name.

It's going to be fantasy in future chapters, and there is a point to her going to the manor. Just the plot and the point don't show up until later ...

Ooo... I know you! I just realized that from reading your story all the way through. Your on RK!! lol I like your story, I want to know what happens ...

OK... Kinda confused though... What do you mean?