Stella_Grrl

This is a totally and completely and amzing story! I love it xD I would definitely give you an A. The only problems I have with teh story are when ...

I really like it although I was slightly confused at the beginning. Why not tell us or show us what happened instead of just right into it? I didn't really ...

Wow. Truthfully I can't find anything wrong with this piece except correct the spelling of L O V E. Lol! The only other thing I would probably say is that ...

wow it's so beautiful it really made me want to cry....it's so deep and emotional! it's sad and yet true.child abuse happens everyday you should be proud of your poem! ...

I'm in love with this poem! Me personally, I prefer my poems to be depressing. I'm not sure why but that's just me. Everything just seems to fit together like ...