Starrywolf

Hey! I'll be, you know, reviewing. Prologue: Okay, firstly, grammar nazi mode. There are quite a few typos/mistakes: Prolog = Prologue a girl who’s animal is the wolf. = a ...

Okay, so, firstly. I like the idea so far here, and it really drew me in. But one of the things I noticed is that you used a lot of ...

Firstly, this made me sad in a kind of bittersweet way. How she didn't know how much time had passed, and how he remembered. Anyway, I didn't see anything weird ...

How do you see me? Am I weird, not normal gross, ugly, strange or informal The stanza should end with a question mark. The rhyme seems nice and natural, well ...

“I’m just not sure what it is, exactly.” “Perhaps if I…give it a nudge? Perhaps…it’ll move?” “No, no, you might upset it, should it be a dangerous animal.” This is ...

Sorry for taking so long, it slipped my mind! The opening paragraph was very symbolic and metaphorical. This is good in small doses, but remember that the reader has to ...

Like the posters above, I can feel the emotion in this piece. It's short, but still gives a connection with the reader- that's some real skill there. I love, LOVE ...

Remember to capitalize the beginnings of sentences. whats hi * What's hi? (note caps and question mark) Punctuation is nice too. It's a nice little poem. Maybe use some synonyms ...

It's a very beautiful poem, and you definitely succeeded in your goal. Like one of the commenters above, I really loved the last two lines. They really had a great ...

T he offices of The Detroit Chronicle were out-dated and out of place. Once a prominent feature in the city’s skyline, the 1930s building which housed Michigan’s most popular daily ...

I love the quotes you put in there. It has a great effect. I like how you put the MC's rationalization in there. It helps the reader understand how the ...

Firstly, I will fix grammar. It was a normal day and Samantha was walking with Sebastian to school. "For some reason, I have a feeling that something weird is going ...

A couple of the lines could have been broken off differently. I want to smell teh calming *the And let ti cool my anger. *it It's a really thought provoking ...

James threw on his backpack, and jumped into the front passenger’s seat of his dad’s white truck. He breathed deeply, and tried to calm his nerves as his dad drove ...

Plains. As far as the eye can see, flat farmland. Looking out one may think they can see the end of the earth, an eternal road that only ends when ...