StarGazer

Hello! Wow, this is way better than any essay I could write. It's very impressive, how you channeled you feelings of friendship and community like this. It's hard to try ...

Hello! I just came from your first piece, and I have to say they complement each other really well! This fleshed out the unfinished feel I got from the other ...

Hello! Wow, this was excellent! The imagery is wonderful and vivid and I can feel the person behind this. The only thing I'm confused about is the order. Is the ...

Hello! This was very good. I really liked the three different positions and views of the bridge shown. To some, it's just a pretty sight, but to others, it's so ...

Hello! This was a really interesting take on a biblical story. I wasn't completely sure if it was Noah until his son brought the animal toys, so that was a ...

Hello! Well, that was interesting. Very fun! I really enjoyed this unusual look into a battle, even if it wasn't real. Meeting these few people and learning a bit about ...

Hello! I liked this piece, but I have to say ahead of time love stories are not my favorites, so take this with a grain of salt. The diary entries ...

Hi! I liked this. I can't relate to it very much (Jewish, sorry) but I can feel the message. The rhymes are mostly good, the only one that bothers me ...

Hello! Oh, wow, this was wonderful! I love the picture you painted with the angels. They're a family, and every family has its faults. I especially loved when Nathaniel told ...

Hello! I don't write song lyrics (though not for any lack of trying), so take this with a grain of salt. I really liked all the rhyming in this piece. ...

Hello! This was an excellent piece, wrapping a mystery up nicely with enough beautiful language to keep us intrigued. The entire concept of The Bond was well handled, explained enough ...

Hello! I have to say, in the description you said this character is from Raider's Scapegoat. I have no idea what that is, but I still very much enjoyed this ...

Hi! Wow, this is really impressive! This is supposed to be a review, but I'm not sure what to advise you about! I pretty much wrote this to tell you ...

Hello! This is a solid piece with a lot of good writing. It feels fluid, but my problem is it's too short. The flashback feels sudden and shoved in and ...

What? The end? I like it! Not a wrap up of complete safety, but another possibility. This entire story has been running on possibilities, so a "good end" would be ...