StarDuster

yes, punctuation does exist in the world of poetry, however i would like to remind you that there is creative license. like e.e. cummings doesn't capitalize his poetry; it is ...

That's very good. Nice and gruesome with the bones sticking out hahaha! One more grammar mistake that is going to bother me until you fix it :wink: : “Mom, I ...

you do have something special. but if anyone knew that, i would. :smt002

yeah..sorry about the color. I haven't been on this site in a while and I guess I just got a little too excited... Well, now you can read it. :) ...

Awww.. This is so sweet. I really loved it. What better way to cheer her up? I bet she really really enjoyed it! I have no complaints. How can you ...

I actually had a different line there... it was "cutting through trees" but then I used trees further down in the poem. I had no idea what to change that ...

thank you everyone!

All of these seem very deep. They are all very well-written and got me to thinking. I don't know how to critique them, but I just wanted to let you ...

Thank you. That helped me alot. I will work on it as soon as I find the time. I hope I can improve it..

Wow. This is amazing. I don't think there's much of anything that needs to be changed.