Squishy

zen and the art of motorcycle maintenance and stranger in a strange land and brave new world

this is really good. do what the above person suggests (runs off tor ead nex chapter)

yes. it was for the first kiss competition! wish me luck

hahaha.. math is funny.. i think it should be "through hell" and that's all i found.. good section of literaure.. would like a story to go around it, could become ...

HOLY. CRAP. that was legendary... kudos... but there were some spelling mistakes (bleading, dieing...) were they purposeful?

very good, and i loved how you used the edward- loves- bella allusion but don't take it over the top with the stephanie- meyer- novel- vampire allusion. just a little ...

comicbook! its okay to call it a comic book. we won't judge you!

oops! review got cut off short... where was I ? oh yeah.. and in the quote, you basically set yourself up to give a recap of what happened as your ...

delve deeper into the realm of your innocence which should make the creepy stalker dude seems much more filthy. capitalize on this opportunity for a foil. could be great

that sucks.... it is cliche though, but i have a feeling it could get interesting witha little attention to the plot. what's it like from darchie's point of view?

writing stories fromt he bible... quite creative... kudos

really good, i got into it (actually) i'm not really a zombie person but even in my adversity was it entertaining. im not a gore person either, but you might ...

elaborate and make it longer... its al little hard to get into it when its so short so keep going