Squirtlepowiee

Hey! Squirtlepowiee here for another review. I’ll keep it short because a lot are my personal opinion and I won’t include that. "Shujaa, Boss Nia wants to see you in ...

Hey! Squirtlepowiee here for another review! This will be a very short one, because this piece is very lacking in errors. That’s a job done perfectly! “The door creaked open ...

Hey! Squirtlepowiee here for another review! Such amazing talent you possess... I interpreted this as cyber bullying going on without punishment and without fear. Faceless people are what people assum

Hey! Squirtlepowiee here for another review! Today, I will make a very short one. “The shadows grow longer, creeping along the ground like the ominous feeling sliding along Zoltar’s scales.” ...

Hello! Squirtlepowiee here for another review! “When Devin woke, she was sprawled across a tweed couch.” This wasn’t a very good start to be honest. Try starting the chapter with ...

Hello! Squirtlepowiee here for another review! “Curi monologued in her head a lot, sometimes in praise or criticism. No one knew how many one-sided conversations she had. She liked herself ...

Hello! Squirtlepowiee here for another review! “He aimed and shot, a loud crack echoing throughout the forest.” Through instead of throughout should be sufficient enough. “Still, the creature tu

Hello! Squirtlepowiee here for another review! “Warm air brushed across my face; contrasting with the fact that I was cold.” I would not use the ; here. You can just ...

Hello! Squirtlepowiee here for another review! This time, instead of reviewing after I read, I’ll review during. “We depend on the snow to survive, soon it will all have melted ...

Hello! Squirtlepowiee here for another review! Wow, you are truly an amazing person! I have never met someone with a little errors in their writing as you are. Now onto ...

Hello! Squirtlepowiee here for another review! I just have a few things to say about your story. Very few errors and I will get to them in a sec: “But ...

Hello! Squirtlepowiee here for another review! As I was reading, I noticed very few mistakes. Very very few. Nice job! Now for the ones I noticed: “He skims his fingers ...

Hello! Squirtlepowiee here for another review! I was reading through the story, when I found mistakes. Lots of them. It’s okay to have mistakes, but remember the rules of grammar ...

Hello! Squirtlepowiee here for another review! I don't have much to say because this is a very short piece without many mistakes. Just a few, and I'll list them here: ...

Hello! I'm back with another review. This time, I don't have much to say! I didn't see many errors or weird sentences. If you reread your story, I'm sure you ...