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Hey Jiggity. I basically printed this out and did the critique there. Now I'm transferring it over here. It would be incriminating enough, if they hadn’t caught her in the ...

Hey Cassandra :) Even though I was fifteen minutes early for the time we’d agreed to meet, my nerves weren’t calm. They were on fire. Ok. First of all, the ...

Hey Suzanne. I ran away from home when leaves were hanging to trees by their last vein. Excellent start! Starting the game off with a powerful extended metaphor that skillfully ...

Hey there dear :D Time for the extraordinary critique :) Cheeks burning, heart thumping so loud you’re certain everybody can hear, legs to useless jelly. Legs turning to useless jelly ...

I'm currently reading "A Gathering Light" for my novel study in my English class. I think it's a pretty alright book, but I don't really like Mattie's character, as she ...

Hey gyrfalcon. "He is a troublemaker, lord," sneered Reshold. "He is insubordinate, he resists punishment, he stirs dissention among the other slaves, he thinks himself above his tasks, the list ...

Hey there. The grave is dug. I see you; your scythe drags in the snow. You wait earnestly by the coffin; time to meet your desire. Ok firstly, I don't ...

Hello Yoha. The moon was high overhead when I first saw its grungy grey sails ahead of me near the horizon. It looked to be a safe merchant ship. I ...

Hey Church. “This is an emergency broadcast bulletin!” The automated system yelped as the speaker was whipped away by the two hundred plus mile per hour winds of a freshly ...

Hey Dreamer. He turns to face Sam, the girl sitting across from him. At sixteen, he seems so much more mature to her. He is handsome, his face perfectly made. ...

Hey Grif. Well I've already mentioned as to how I felt about this piece. I like the simple style that this is written in as it really makes the humour ...

Hey there Dusk. With a grin, they headed into town on shore leave, Danic bouncing L’ira lightly on his shoulders. I'm kinda confused by this sentence. Are you saying that ...

Hey there. Buildings had toppled over one another or broken off into separate parts. Plants and vines had overgrown and tangled themselves around any nearby objects they could find. Dozens ...

Hello Laf. A child sits in front of the mirror, her eyes intent upon her own delicate face. With a gentle hand, she strokes her cheek, admiring the softness, the ...

Hey there. Felix woke with a jolt at the sound of a piercing scream. This is kinda cliche. Main character waking up due to a sound? Not the most original ...