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My turn to have a go at this! I'm Sporks, by the way. Exhausted from crying, the little girl fell on her knees. Why is she crying? The cold snow ...

Hey Quillie! I'll get on to a review for you. Red is tech stuff, green is word choice change, if any, and purple is my commentary! Right then...on to the ...

Hey there! Sporks here! Overall, this was pretty good. However, I have a couple nitpicks. One, break up your text! The wall effect you have going on right now is ...

Hey there! I'm Sporks and I'll review this today. To be honest, I really, really love this poem. It's very unique and well done. The pledge is unique, and while ...

Hey there! Overall, I liked this poem. It's cute and humorous without trying too, too hard. However, I do have a nitpick. There is a spot or two where my ...

Hey luxy! It's Sporks. I'm going to review this. Just so you know, red is technical stuff, green is word choice, and purple is my commentary. Another wave of agonizing ...

Hey there aero! Can I call you that? : ) Anyway. I'm SporkPunk, and I'll review this today for you. I'll start with a full-text review, which gives my corrections ...

Hey there! I'm SporkPunk and I'll review this today. Least Among my vile things, Why is among capitalized? And the pain my demons bring, The softest sour note I sing, ...

Hey retro! Sorry this took me so long. :( But I'm here now! C: Silence. Deadly, paranoid silence. It screams across the moors

Luxy! I must say that I think it's amazing that you've kept the nickname I gave ya. That's pretty awesome. :D Anyway, within the spoiler is my full-text review. Grammar/spelling/technical ...

Hey Jash! Finally here to review. Sorry it's taken me so long. :P My full text review is in the spoiler. Snowflake left for New York the previous night. She ...

Hey there sakura! It's Spork, and I'll be reviewing this today. First, I'm going to go through your piece and point out mistakes, if any, and then move on to ...

Hi, I don't really think this is working. You have a good idea, and I really like the idea behind it, but I don't think you went about it the ...

Hey there, The Rondel works, structurally. However, this reads more like prose. Poetry should us imagery and metaphors---you shouldn't spell it out for your readers. Your idea here, life being ...

Hi, Alexxa! Spork here to review. Sorry this took so long...school's quite busy, and it's homecoming, so I've been at school more than home. But now I have free time. ...