Spitfire

Hey there MMinc! Spitfire here to review! It’s impossible not to an automatic voice called from deep inside her head, fizzed and flat from all the time it had not ...

Hey there MMinc! Okay so I read the chapter. It had a lot of problems, but everyone else seemed to have said them already, so I won't bother. Moving on, ...

Okay, I was a little confused about chapter 6, but I finally got what you meant. So here I go! “It’s an honor your majesty.” bowed the Ven before Rhea. ...

First of all, I so didn't nag! I threatened you to post, completely different! :lol: Anyways, I'm reading the chapter, and I only noticed two things: As I stared at ...

Hey there TH! Sorry it took me so long to get to the fourth chapter; I thought I had read it all, but remembered I'd stopped in the middle 'cause ...

Hey there Apple! I really liked the story, like the others said, you can easily fit yourself into the MC's situation, no matter who you are. But now, for the ...

Hey there RH! So I've just finished reading chapter 2 and went straight for the third. Good idea that was! Like Classy, I already like the girl, although we really ...

Yeah, I know it's been a while since I read the first chapter, but I finally got back into the story! I definitely liked this chapter more than the first. ...

The one called Kala had an eyebrow raised and an irritated look on her face was trying to snob Joshua all throughout his tour of Olympus. There's something missing here, ...

Okay, so I quickly read your two other chapter 1 and 2, but the third chapter is with Joshua and not Alice, so I'm guessing you're sticking with him(??) I ...

Okay, um yeah... This was really good and all, but I'm kind of confused about which beginning I was supposed to read. Is the original the good version or is ...

Oooh, I really liked this one. It definitely isn't the same as the original idea I had about it...it's much better. I'm curious since I don't know where this is ...

It was good, but way too short! I barely had time to get into it and it was finished! As per a writer's opinion, the end was a good cliffhanger, ...

Hello again, doing chapter 3 now... Compared to the Tower, where everything was made of a rough stone, uneven and dangerous if you did not watch where you were going, ...

So I'm up to chapter 2, will read chapter 3 later on... A bolt of lightning shot out from Kanen’s hands shot out and struck him in the chest on ...