Spitfire

Hey there EMJ! I shall use my magnifying class talents (as you called them :wink: ) to review the long awaited chapter 4. Time to carry-on! That was what he ...

First one again, lucky me :D I picture d myself knocking on the door and telling the guard I’d changed my mind; I was coming back in. I was starting ...

Okay, well, since you've had two very long and nicely detailed reviews, I'm going to go for something a little shorter and less...descriptive :lol: I thought the story itself was ...

Ha ha, first one here. Mouhahahaha! Besides, the lighting was better near the windows. Just before you wrote it was dark because of the storm, so the lighting can't really ...

Hey there Skins! All right well I've just went through all of your chapters (I'd already read the first two) and I must say, I really like them! You've got ...

Hey EmmaJane, sorry it took me so long to reply, I've been like overboard busy :lol: On to the review... “Before I continue, may I say that I am most ...

Ooh, good chappy! The only mistakes I noticed are the ones Lauren mentioned, so lets not get into that. I'm also getting bad vibes from Scott now. Something tells me ...

All right. Normally I'd go over your mistakes and what nots, but everybody else seems to have been over them. So honestly, what's the point? I thought the story was ...

Hey there! Well thanks for the PM, I shall review! All right, well I just read through it, and thankfully, there weren't any errors. (or none that I could see ...

Okay well I just noticed this, so I'm going to review!... The Dominion Code, a book that holds crucial knowledge about the world and how to obtain unlimited power. I ...

All right. I see you kept your story's prologue the same but changed your first chapter. I had read the original first chapter you had did, where it was something ...

Hello there! Sorry it took me so long to reply, I haven't been coming on lately, too busy. On to reviewing... Well since I'd read it already, there isn't much ...

Well I'd normally have something to mention here, but really, I don't. I think everyone else basically said anything I might have wanted to, especially Rascalover. Over all, good chapter. ...

Lol, well I honestly don't have anything to say since I'd read it before you'd even posted it. I don't remember exactly everything I had pointed out last time, but ...

Hey RH! Sorry it took me so long to review, I just hadn't gotten to your chapter yet! I honestly don't have much to say after Esme's review. She really ...