SpiritedWolfe

(Falyn is 16 :P)

By 'move on', I mean to another sin. Because once on 'sin' is done, usually it's seen to be easier for people to accept temptation again and again. So the ...

Hey, pretzel. Thanks for the review. One huge thing that I think you may be missing, I don't want to describe the entirety of everything in detail. Emotions and all ...

Zeke is the best. *nods*

Thank you so much! x 400. I will absolutely use your advice when redrafting and trying to write later on. (I really needed someone to shred this. Thank you again ...

It's coming soon! xD Thanks for the review! Better late than never, I say. I noticed the actually thing. Still too lazy to fix it.

Yes, but Sam was kind trying to make sure neither of them died... Oh wait, they were holding hands in the stall too xD Fine. But don't expect any Sam/Marrian ...

I can see you shipping them. (The second sentence was supposed to say one of the two guards he encountered first in the night.) Thanks for the review! ^^

Thanks for the review! ^^ The shard didn't actually help Ethan, since it temporarily paralyzed him. So, I should probably make that more clear. (I also realized that I changed ...

Don't hate me D:

Yeah... So, with Ashley on the other team, it's really hard to show her, but no worries! She isn't forgotten. And about the animals... There aren't really any xD I ...

Uh, Jasper... Sorry to say but this is about 9-ish chapters in the novel. (I didn't write it, but I have reviewed it since the beginning.)

Noelle o.o You're following so many novels, why are you putting yourself with another one??

They aren't a part of that, so I should definitely reword that. Mostly, Sam saved her because he needed her, so there's that. She was just kind of paralyzed at ...

I was trying to make it like a regular conversation, that neither of them really want go on. (Sam manipulating Ethan ;P) And the signs from the Syrin will be ...