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Re: Death Has No Friends
Hello Ctor, Wolf here for a review. So I do notice a lot of the major issues were pointed out by the previous reviewer, and they're correct in what they ...
Jun 12, 2014 -
Re: Chapter One Out To Sea
Hello again r4p, Wolf here for another review. So I have just gotten finished reading your other work, The Secret Project. Now I am extremely confused. Are these supposed to ...
Jun 12, 2014 -
Re: Chapter One The Secret Project
Hello r4p, Wolf here for a review. First off a few nitpicks: IF ONLY I WOULD REMEMBER TO CHOP WOULD AT NIGHT! WELL ANYHOW. I'LL JUST HAVE TO REMBER. As ...
Jun 12, 2014 -
Re: how it happened.
Hello Huda, Wolf here for a review. Before I dive into this work, I want to point out three little things. First off, paragraph length. Be very careful that what ...
Jun 12, 2014 -
Re: Start of book. Comments lots.
Hello kheda, Wolf here for a review. Before I even start reading this, I do want to mention your paragraphs. You have so many mega paragraphs. I mean, just wow. ...
Jun 12, 2014 -
Re: Secrets Of the World- Chapter 3
Hello Mackenzie, Wolf here for a review. (Please excuse any grammatical/spelling errors, for I am on a phone.) I am super happy you finally posted this chapter, after weeks of ...
Jun 11, 2014 -
Re: Silence is Silver, Chapter 12.
Hey Raven, Wolf here for a review. A few nitpicks: the aura of colours hit her full blast. 'the' should be capitalized. “What’s going on?” The woman asked. Little something ...
Jun 10, 2014 -
Re: The Missing Ones(Full, First Draft)
Hello Katya, Wolf here for a magical review. (Please excuse any grammatical/spelling errors, for I am on my phone.) Alrighty, so I see you've ignored all the advice I gave ...
Jun 10, 2014 -
Re: Across Worlds - Chapter 12
Hello Noelle, Wolf here for a review. (Hopefully you have faith in me this time) You know, there are times in a novel when one's emotions get going, and this ...
Jun 10, 2014 -
Re: The Battle. Chapter 1.
Hello dogs, Wolf here to review. Oh, sweet honey darling child. This was a quite, interesting (...?) chapter. I am now an adult. 21 years old to be exact. I ...
Jun 9, 2014 -
Re: Untitled Story 2:1
Hello again Flutter, Wolf here for a review. As usual, I shall start off with some nitpicks. I open my eyes. I look around wildly, seeing the world in only ...
Jun 9, 2014 -
Re: The Simultaneous life of a Count and Herbalist
Hello James, I know I am a little insey but late with my review, but hopefully you can use some advice I am to give you! (Please excuse any grammatical/spelling ...
Jun 9, 2014 -
Re: Seth
Hello Lose, Wolf here for a review. First off, some little nitpicks: He wore a black slim fit tee shirt and jeans, black combat boots, black and gold cuffs around ...
Jun 7, 2014 -
Re: The Lorainian Chronicles: Awakening
Hello IWrite, Wolf here for a review. (Please excuse any grammatical/spelling errors, for I am on a phone.) I do notice most of the technical stuff was already pointed out, ...
Jun 7, 2014 -
Re: How To Train Your Dragon Chapter 2 - Training Begins
Hello Puppies, Wolf here for a review. (Please excuse any grammatical/spelling errors, for I am on my phone.) First a few nitpicks: "What the heck is that thing!?" So, even ...
Jun 6, 2014