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SpiritedWolfe

and i kept walking, even if my feet were too tired to hold me up anymore

  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: Across Worlds - Chapter 16 Part 1

    Hello, Noelle, Wolf here finally for a review after I furiously finished typing my LMS entry! Oh my goodness, the irony is killing me! I can totally see the ship ...

    Jul 14, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Literature, General Re: Silence is Silver, Chapter 16

    Hey Raven, Wolf here for a review. Two little nitpicks that I found: Rease’s lovely snapped open, she could see Kase and Kylan. I think the word 'eyes' is missing ...

    Jul 13, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Typo Alley~A Part Two [Revised]

    Hello R4P, Wolf here for a review. (It might be of useful information to you that I am female, but since you're the author, do what you wish xD) Okay, ...

    Jul 11, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Dramatic Re: Her Mask - Chapter Two

    Hello again, Pink, Wolf here for a review. I have a question, does this particular novel have a name? I recall the first chapter was labeled 'Her Mask - Chapter ...

    Jul 11, 2014
  • Short Story » Romantic, Fantasy Re: The Teal Ribbon

    Hello Authorian, Wolf here for a review. First off, this was really good! I loved how short and sweet it was, and you pulled this off really well. The idea ...

    Jul 10, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Science Fiction Re: Redwing - Chapter 5 *Edited*

    Hep Utopia, Wolf here for a review. So before I dive into content, I have one little technical suggestion. Throughout this chapter, I notice a little bit of switching back ...

    Jul 8, 2014
  • Short Story » Science Fiction, Action / Adventure Re: Going on anything

    Hello Languid, Wolf here for a review. Before I go into content stuff, I want to cover a few technical issues. First off, those are some giant paragraphs. So, with ...

    Jul 8, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Dramatic Re: REDACTED

    Hello Geo and Tigga, Wolf here for a review. First thing, everytime there is new dialogue, like a new person speaking or the same person speaking after a long pause, ...

    Jul 6, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Typo Alley~A: Part One

    Hello R4P, Wolf here for a review. So this is what the chatroom was going on before...? Interesting. Aright, so I have a few grammar issues with this, and then ...

    Jul 4, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Literature, General Re: Silence is Silver, Chapter 15.

    Hey Raven, Wolf here for a review. Aww, I loved this chapter so much, and the ending was so adorable! I love how you really show Kylan's compassion for Rease, ...

    Jul 3, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Dramatic Re: Her Mask - Chapter One

    Hello Pink, Wolf here for a review. Wow, I did really love this. It's only a chapter in and I already feel empathy with Noelle. Already, we get a good ...

    Jul 2, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, General Re: Misery or Humanity (chapter 3)

    Hello Rocket, Wolf here for another review. I'm kind of disappointed of the length of this chapter, because there is so much more that can be built off of this ...

    Jul 2, 2014
  • Other » General, General Re: The darkness

    Hello Secret, Wolf here for a review. Welcome to the wonderful world that is YWS, and I hope you enjoy you're time here! (Review Time:) Alright, so I'll probably go ...

    Jul 1, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fanfiction, Science Fiction Re: When You Hear The Howl: War of the Worlds

    Hello Unique, Wolf here for a review. Now, I found this quite interesting. You called this 'War of the Worlds', but yet you don't really give much details about this ...

    Jul 1, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Chapter 7: The Roommates

    Hello, Artemis, Wolf here for a review. I am very intrigued and very disappointed in myself for not finding this story earlier. So, I have not read the previous chapter ...

    Jun 30, 2014


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