SpiritedWolfe

Hello again, Zafea, Wolf here for another review. Alright, first things first, I recommend to you to split your chapters into parts. They are a little too long. Really, no ...

Hello, zafea, Wolf here for a review. Alright, so first thing I want to recommend to you is to go back through this and proofread, and try to reread everything ...

Hello, Artemis, Wolf here for another review. So I've come back for more, but this time I'm starting at the beginning rather than straight in the middle. With that said, ...

Hello again, danceof, Wolf here for another review. Whoa, whoa, whoa. Is this the actual first chapter? It sure seems like it, yet is is labeled chapter three. I am ...

Hello, danceof, Wolf here for a review. One thing I wanted to ask before I do any reading is, where is the first chapter? Usually second and third chapters do ...

Hello, porcupine, Wolf here for a review. This was quite interesting, and I am intrigued to read more. The tone is quite upbeat, maybe even playful, with the side notes ...

Hello MooCow, Wolf here for a review. I do agree with Iggy that needs to be split up, not only for the sake of concentrating on the specific spot, but ...

Hello, Willis, Wolf here for a review. I know, I know. I'm a really bad child for not reading this earlier and skipping straight to the second part of the ...

Hello, Kataya, Wolf here for a fabulous review :D So, scrolling through the forest of the Green Room, I found this magical piece and decided, eh, why not? On to ...

Hello, Kelpies, Wolf here for a review. I really liked you introduction, since it really hooked me in! What does a cat have to do with anything, was the question ...

Hello again, Linguid, Wolf here for a review. Before I start on content stuff, I want to recommend to you to reread every part of this word for word, so ...

Hello Looney, Wolf here for a review! So I see that you are fairly new to this site, and I welcome you with open arms! You've come at quite a ...

Hello again, R4P, Wolf here for a review. Alright, I just have one nitpick and it's really small: I honestly could care less. This is in RP's dialogue and it ...

Hello, Elinor, Wolf here for a review. Awww. So I see that this was meant to be short, sweet, and to the point. Even so, I did feel some little ...

Hello, r4p, Wolf here for another review. First off some nitpicks: Racen watched as the dwarf with his pickaxe and Wold, with her paws and claws dug down deep through ...