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Re: Why the wind howls
Hello, Pomp, Wolf here for a review. Bravo, Bravo! My goodness, Pomp! This was fantastic and just... Wow. More praise later. I've got two little nitpicks first: ...the red dripping ...
Aug 3, 2014 -
Re: Across Worlds - Chapter 17 Part 2
Hello, Noelle, Wolf here finally for a review! (And to knock this out of the Green Room ;) ) Alright, so some misinterpretation on my part, I think, in the ...
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Re: Haunted by R.G. Johnson
Hello, bobis, Wolf here for a review. So, the very first thing I noticed when I looked at this piece is the lack of paragraphs. I'm not sure if it ...
Aug 2, 2014 -
Re: Silence is Silver, Chapter 19.
Hello, Raven, Wolf here for a review. So slowly but surely you are completely tearing away Rease's life from her and making her slowly become insane by deteriorating her mind ...
Aug 1, 2014 -
Re: Chapter 14: The Attempt
Hello, Artemis, Wolf here for another review. I'm going to just dive right into the criticism. So I'm a little bit confused, especially towards the end. In the beginning, when ...
Jul 30, 2014 -
Re: Ordadus- Chapter Five
Hello, Wolfie, Wolfare here for a review. Alrighty, so you finally got another chapter up! Awesome as usual, and I appreciate that it's average sized rather than 'fun-sized' (like the ...
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Re: Chandelier
Hello, Noelle, Wolf here for a review. Okay, yes usually it would be smart of one to read the warning label in big red letters at the top before reading ...
Jul 30, 2014 -
Re: The Blood Bond (Chapter Three: Dente Sculpes
Hello, danceof, Wolf here for another review. I find it quite unusual that you would use double spacing between paragraphs like that, since there is already a provided space when ...
Jul 29, 2014 -
Re: Across Worlds - Chapter 17 Part 1
Hello, Noelle, Wolf here for a review ;3 Smooth beginning. I really don't feel it's a really good transition, as R4 mentioned. 'Akia apologized to Falyn.' How boring is that. ...
Jul 29, 2014 -
Re: Chapter 13: Lucian
Hello again, Artemis, Wolf here for a review. One thing that came to me while I was reading is that you use the word smirk a lot, especially when talking ...
Jul 27, 2014 -
Re: Chapter 12: The Tutor
Hello, Artemis, Wolf here for another review. I will do my best to keep my fangirling to a minimum, but no guarantees. The part about the sorcerers leaving was quite ...
Jul 27, 2014 -
Re: Chapter 11: The aftermath
Hello, Artemis, Wolf here for another review. So this chapter seemed like yet another filler. Which isn't really a bad thing, but the beginning seemed kind of disoriented. I have ...
Jul 27, 2014 -
Re: Chapter 10: The Impression
Hello, Artemis, Wolf here for another review. Oh my goodness, this has to be one of your best chapters yet. Really, I absolutely loved the burning passion and all the ...
Jul 27, 2014 -
Re: Chapter 9: The Theory
I so ship them. Billie and Lucian forevah
Jul 27, 2014 -
Re: Chapter 8: The Classes
Hello, Artemis, Wolf here for a review. I'm really sorry if my reviews from here on out seem kind if drab or repeat the same things over and over again. ...
Jul 27, 2014
