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SpiritedWolfe

and i kept walking, even if my feet were too tired to hold me up anymore

  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: The Last Archon CH1: Remembering Shadows

    Heya, Numbers! Ready for a review? :P Ah, Morn. You just love that character, don't you? He's the same as usual. Dark, deadly, hiding from his past. But I do ...

    May 6, 2016
  • Short Story » Teen Fiction, Romantic Re: Chapter - 1 ( Teen Life)

    Hello there! ^^ Welcoms to YWS ~ I'll just jump into the review by saying that I agree a lot with the points the review below me has made. This ...

    May 5, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General Re: Burned 6.2

    Hai again :3 This marks me being all caught up ~ So, uh, I don't hate this cliffhanger like I usually would. I mean, it's not bad and I'm definitely ...

    May 5, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General Re: Burned 6.1

    You have terrific timing, Keller. Honestly, that's the most romantic place to ask someone out. A waiting room. (But, well, an exercise room is no better.) Hey! I'm catching up ...

    May 4, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General Re: Burned 5.2

    Hello again!1!!11!! Okay, serious now. I noticed that a lot of the sentences in this -- because I'm looking at structure a lot lately >.> -- are rather short and ...

    May 4, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General Re: Burned 5.1

    Hiya, Noelle! I'm finally back to read your gorgeous novel :3 Uh, I haven't read previous reviews and it's been months since I read the last chapter, so bear with ...

    May 4, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Action / Adventure Re: Children of The Pipes Chapter 5: On Her Own

    Hello there! I apologize upfront for not reading previous parts, and if I ask questions addressed previously, that's why. Bear with me and I will try to provide feedback best ...

    May 3, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Dramatic Re: The Remarkable Blossoming of Lola - Chapter 4

    Hiya, Rain! I want to apologize upfront for not reading previous parts, but I'll see what I can do to assist you with this fine chapter ^^ So, one of ...

    May 3, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Fanfiction, Action / Adventure Re: Déjà Vu chapter 8

    Hello there! I want to apologize for not reading previous parts, so I may ask questions that were already addressed earlier. That being said, I'm fairly confused on what's happening ...

    May 1, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Historical Fiction Re: Confucianism

    Hello there! I'll just jump right into the review ~ First off, there is far too much dialogue in this. While dialogue is important to characterization and learning about the ...

    May 1, 2016
  • Short Story » Realistic, Dramatic Re: dont look down

    Hello, orlam! I seem to have stumbled across this piece of yours ~ Let's just jump right into the review. (But a quick note, I am on a phone so, ...

    May 1, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Action / Adventure Re: Living Nightmare Chapter two

    Hiya, dogs ~ I'm here again to continue with what you have! For the most part of the last review, I covered the overall trends and basics, which all completely ...

    Mar 10, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Action / Adventure Re: Living Nightmare Chapter One

    Hiya, dogs ~ I'm here to review what I can of your novel. I will say, I have read all three parts and I may mention somethings out of order, ...

    Mar 9, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General Re: Burned 4.2

    Hey, Noelle! I'm finally here again xD I'm just going to start off with saying a few things. First, I am super, super excited for the next part of this ...

    Feb 5, 2016
  • Other » Realistic, Romantic Re: The Outsider

    Hey there! I just recently realized that I reviewed another piece of yours ages ago ^^ Hopefully I can focus less on grammar this time. (Some quick notes: I am ...

    Feb 3, 2016


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