SpiritedWolfe

Hi, Shikora! I'm back and ready to review~ So I'm getting back into the story, and I liked the beginning section of this. I do agree with Carlito that the ...

Hey, Shikora! Back at it for another review~ Let's jump right into it. So, generally, I feel like many of the previous chapters have been fairly dialogue heavy. While yes, ...

Hello, Shikora! So this review will be a relatively shorter one, mainly because a lot of the critiques I would have I've already mentioned in past reviews and I realize ...

Hello, Shikora! Back again ^^ Let's get right into it. The bright pail moon rose into the dark, starry sky. The correct word here is pale . A pail is ...

Hey, Shikora! I'm back~ After being really thoroughly about the last chapter, I'll go a little more general this time. First of all, I'm glad that you've included some descriptions ...

Hello! I see you've written this for a competition, so I'll try to be a little bit extra thorough about some grammatical stuff, so sorry about more nitpicks than I'd ...

Hello, DragonsDeep ~ So, I understand that this is a fan-fiction and you may be writing with characters already established in the Fairy Tail universe, but as an outside reader ...

Hello again, Shikora! ^^ Back to continue your lovely novel ~ I'll start off with some quotes. The sand was ruff as Viper walked up the path. I think the ...

Hi, Shikora! I'm a pretty big dragon fan myself, so I was excited when I stumbled upon your story still in the green room! Before I start on this section, ...

Hello, Zami! Let's get right into it. The Oswald Psychiatric Hospital, or, as more commonly known, the Oswald Asylum: the most notorious mental hospital in Oregon. While technically the beginnings ...

Hello, zami! So this chapter was really toned down in the area of feels, and I definitely appreciate that. After putting the reader through something that intense, it is always ...

That was ... intense. The second part of this chapter was really, really intense. And I commend you for that. I think Thomas' part was my "favorite" because when it ...

Hello, zami! I'm here to save your lovely work from the green room~ So first of all, whenever I see the word "prologue" in a title, I always think of ...

Hello, Traltixx! I'm here to leave some constructive criticism on your piece here. But I'll start off with some things I liked about it. First of all, I can tell ...

Hello, FCD! I wanted to welcome you to YWS as well as give some constructive criticism on your writing here ^^ To start off, I think your writing overall flows ...