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Re: piano man and the king of the world (pt.2)
Hi again, Hatt! Sorry for the delay, but I wanted to get this review to your before your revisions were due ^^ I'm actually a bit surprised at the direction ...
Sep 18, 2021 -
Re: Indiscriminate Preferences
Hi Lim! I saw this story in the green room, and I really wanted to give it a read so here I am ^^ Let's start with some line comments. ...
Sep 18, 2021 -
Re: Fade
Hi LiviLove! Welcome to YWS ^^ I'm here to leave a quick review on your poem. First off, I like the topic you chose for your poem! It's a fairly ...
Sep 17, 2021 -
Re: The Evacuation (Part 1)
Hi Broady! First off, welcome to YWS ^^ I’m here for a review on your piece today. I’ll start by making a couple of line comments, and then move on ...
Sep 15, 2021 -
Re: Gotham v. Joker, 1894 (Chapter Thirteen)
Hi MeherazulAzim16! I'm here to leave a review on one of the parts of your novel ^^ Now, I haven't read the rest of the chapters, so I'll try to ...
Sep 14, 2021 -
Re: white lies and campfires
Hi veer! I wanted to bestow upon you another ramble of my thoughts in the shape of a review (partially for the RevMo checklist challenge, but also because I love ...
Sep 14, 2021 -
Re: piano man and the king of the world (pt.1)
Hey Hatt! I'm glad to see some of your writing around again ^^ So allow me to share some thoughts on the start of this essay you have here. First ...
Sep 14, 2021 -
Re: An Odyssey of Love
Hi Rebel! As a heads up, I don't typically review poetry, but I'll still try to give some thoughts to help you improve your poem ^^ First of all, I ...
Sep 14, 2021 -
Re: My Name Is
Hi Noelle! Now you might be wondering why I’m posting a review on such an old work of yours >.> To answer that question, I’m completing some challenges for the ...
Sep 13, 2021 -
Re: Mr. Quirk(Chapter 1)
Hi ForeverYoung! Sorry for taking so long to get back to this, but I still wanted to fulfill your request ^^ Also, as a disclaimer, I haven't read other reviews, ...
Sep 11, 2021 -
Re: On Wings of Fire: Chapter 28
Hi Mea! I've mentioned this to you before, I absolutely loved reading this novel. The last parts especially pulled me in and it was really easy for me to get ...
Sep 11, 2021 -
Re: On Wings of Fire: Chapter 27
Hi Mea! I'm back to finish up your novel today :) This will end up being a shorter review because I don't have a whole lot to comment on this ...
Sep 9, 2021 -
Re: On Wings of Fire: Chapter 26
Hi Mea! Here is your daily review :) This will be a shorter one because I honestly don't have very much to say about this chapter! It was great to ...
Sep 9, 2021 -
Re: On Wings of Fire: Chapter 25
Hi Mea! Since I've kind of cheated and already finished the novel
Sep 7, 2021 -
Re: On Wings of Fire: Chapter 24
Hi Mea! I’m typing up some of this on my phone, so please excuse any weird typos >.> I’ll try to catch them as I write. Let’s start with the ...
Sep 7, 2021