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Re: Aether's Heart 8.2
Hi Chaser and Vincian! Here to finish up this part ^^ The first thing that came to mind is about the header at the top of this part. For every ...
Oct 1, 2021 -
Re: Aether's Heart 8.1
Hi Vincian and Chaser! Back again for a review ^^ I'll start with some line comments and then give overall impressions. “What the hell did that guy sell me?” she ...
Oct 1, 2021 -
Re: Aether's Heart 7
Hi Vincian and Scar! I've finally come back to review these parts ^^ Also, I'm reviewing without reading others, so apologies if I repeat something. First small thing, I think ...
Sep 30, 2021 -
Re: winged embrace
Hi Holy! I missed the trend of chicken poems last year, but I wanted to revisit it after it was reference in RevMo's checklist challenge ^^ So here I am! ...
Sep 30, 2021 -
Re: Awakening Chapter 10: Instinct
Hi Otterpop! I saw your chapter has been in the green room for a while, so I wanted to stop by with a review. Clearly, I haven't read other parts, ...
Sep 30, 2021 -
Re: It Pumps Love🫀🤷♀️
Hi LilPWilly! I wanted to leave a review on your poem today :) I like your take on a love poem with humor mixed in! The way that you've written ...
Sep 28, 2021 -
Re: Flight
Hi Sunset! I know this is a quite old piece, but I'm working through the Review Checklist challenge this month, and you're the first person who left me a review ...
Sep 28, 2021 -
Re: Tarkohf: Chapter 2 Jullietes Calling
Hi there Beast! You posted this chapter in the General Review Repository a few months ago, so I figured I'd add another review to it ^^ Of all the foods ...
Sep 27, 2021 -
Re: Man Vs. Mirror
Hi Andrew! I’m writing this review on my phone, so please excuse any typos :) And please feel free to ask any clarifying questions if my message gets lost in ...
Sep 26, 2021 -
Re: Magpie
Hi Moo! Sorry to leave a piece on such an old piece, but I'm completing RevMo's checklist challenge I wanted to revisit this concrete poem of yours ^^ Clearly, you ...
Sep 25, 2021 -
Re: somonka: two lovers in winter
Hi Lim! I'm working through the checklist, and I remembered you like structured poems, so I wanted to drop a review for you :) I really liked this piece! Since ...
Sep 24, 2021 -
Re: Transcript of an Encounter with a Mighty Green Beast in the Green Room
Hi Harry! I saw this while it was still a fresh piece in the green room, but I still wanted to leave a review even though you have a decent ...
Sep 23, 2021 -
Re: "Normal"
Hello there! First of all, this is a really powerful piece. I really enjoyed the way that you structured this piece, especially since you have a lot of little details ...
Sep 22, 2021 -
Re: pantheon
Hi luke! I wanted to leave a review on your piece ^^ To start off, you have a lot of really beautiful imagery in this piece. Like Hikari, I think ...
Sep 21, 2021 -
Re: Gracing the Graffiti
Hi Simon! I'm Wolfe, and I'm here to leave a review on your piece ^^ I think you have a good start to your story here. You've clearly thought about ...
Sep 20, 2021
