SpencerReidIsMyLife

Interesting. I didn't really see how there's multiple voices in this one, but I'll take your word for it! Honestly I think that sometimes others can really catch things (especially ...

Thank you so much! I appreciate the compliments!

Thanks for the review! I appreciate your compliments! As for your questions and critiques: 1. I understand that I use the dash a lot (one of my champagne problems lol), ...

Hi! thanks for the review. As for your questions: 1. Ducks in tow= kids following her as she went. 2. three screens just references how we have multiple electronics. In ...

Thank you for the review! I can see what you mean about ducks in tow (thanks for the spelling correction!), but I guess I kinda just used it as a ...

Thank you for the review! This grounding mechanism was based on something I personally do. I tend to scratch my finger on things to ground myself, or just as a ...

Thanks for the review! Do you think you could elaborate on the three voices though? I don't think I'm getting what you mean. They are all meant to come from ...

Thank you for the lengthy review! I will take everything into consideration when I edit!!! The next chapter is up if you want to read it!

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zsmith, Wow this is a really great poem! i can see the struggle this guy is going through in order to get this girl to talk to him. I keep ...

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zsmith, Wow this is a really great poem! i can see the struggle this guy is going through in order to get this girl to talk to him. I keep ...

so.... There will definitely be some action next chapter! well, sort of. There will be a cliffhanger that will lead to some action, if you know what I mean *Wink, ...

Hey lightsong! I love this and will definitely be liking this! This is one of the best poems I've seen on here, though I am fairly new to this site. ...

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