SpencerNolanRivers

There's some grammar errors here and there, but I didn't really feel like pointing them out. Maybe, if you went over the story you will find them and correct them. ...

I had never really expected anything to happen between my best friend Carl and I . That fixes the sentence. I thought would be a train wreck waitin g to ...

I loved this story. I was planning on critiquing some grammar and everything, but nothing. Your piece is nearly flawless, I would say. I also loved the imagery you've used. ...

Cupcake is a thirteen-year-old girl not much taller than me with green hair , pale skin , and long eyelashes over purple eyes. There should a comma between "Hair," "Pale" ...

“I am not a ‘kiddo,’” I retort . It is best to just say "Said." “Right. You’re what, 9 or 10? You’re a big girl now?” he questions, "He" should ...

" You are the only person that can make my heart beat faster and slower at the same time " - The Hot Chick If you are trying to convey ...

"Umm, I think Genevieve is here." I said to my teacher , Mrs. Martin. There should be a comma inbetween "Teacher" and "Mrs. Martin." "Honey, Genevieve doesn't come 'till the ...

I had wanted the same faraway paradise , u ntil Dad got sick. "Hello, Becca. Welcome home , " a nd then, "No , u ntil Wednesday." she had missed ...

"Ian , I can't get down!" Kali yelled from the highest branch of the oak tree. "I need to walk now. Please , Ian, you know I can't run as ...

This was good, though I do not exactly understand the ending. Is the person the main character is in love with dead or non-existant? The beginning was very good and ...

Prom and my date is Matt, who is also my best friend.. I nearly fell asleep of that it felt so good. Running my hands through my dark shaggy emo ...

S’okay,” I sputter, chugging down my glass of water, which being the only part of the meal that isn’t completely revolting. I close my eyes just a few seconds before ...

It was a strange feeling knowing your wouldn’t be seeing your friends most of the summer ; the friends that you've spent almost every waking moment with, the ones that ...

The noise of crunching metal, the stench of burning rubber, the taste of noxious fumes in the air. I could see the clouds of white smoke rising up in front ...

Not my best ever, but I needed to post something with all these points! Just kidding. Please review! My Dearest Mother, I’m sorry. I’m sorry that you have to bear ...