SpencerNolanRivers

Hi. My name is Kiara and I've read about 1/3 of the whole thing. There are several errors that can easily be fixed by proof-reading over this again, so not ...

Hi. My name is Kiara, and I'll be critiquing your work here. The thought of him made me so, so angry. There isn't a need for the second "so." No, ...

Hey, there. My name is Kiara, and I shall be reviewing your entry right here, right now. Red = inserting something that should be there. Blue = a correction that ...

Hello, Again. Ugh, I know, not this girl again. Hahaha. I'll be reviewing this second chapter now, since I liked the first one so much. Glen put his headphones in ...

Hallo, ich bin Kiara. That is "Hello, I am Kiara" in the German language. I will be reviewing this chapter of your piece, here. Possibly, if I enjoy it a ...

Hello, I am Kiara. You can call me Kiki if you'd like, a lot of people do. I will be reviewing your story here. ...now he’s dumping me like a ...

Hello! My name is Kiara, and I'll be reviewing your work here. With a struggle , I pull myself back to the present to answer it. "Hello," I say way ...

Hello. I am Kiara, and I'll be critiquing your work here. Mr . Bynes was one of a kind. If you are going to be using the abbreviated form of ...

Hello, my name is Kiara and I will be critiquing your work here. Oh… there’s a lot I can say about him. The underlined bit serves no purpose. Why is ...

Hello. My name is Kiara, and I will be reviewing/critiquing your piece today. Everything that defines who and what I am has made me different, strange, foreign ; an outsider. ...

They got him yesterday . They said that on the news. I move forward s and backwards in the same fast pace It’s somewhat soothing, I think . The motion, ...

He placed a single rose in my hand . I clenched it too tight, causing the thorns to cut into my hand Redundant. They started inching closer and closer and ...

I really enjoyed this piece. You are a swell writer, and only made a few mistakes on grammar and punctuation, which would easily be fixed by proof-reading. Although, I believe ...

Hey, girl, hey! I am Kiara, and I will be critiquing your piece. Even though the chain mail was considerably lighter than the plate armor ( and she could move ...

Hello, I am Kiara, and I will be correcting and critiquing your work here. that is when he had been alive. this was all so odd. she shut her eyes ...