Spaulds

Wow! Really nice poetry! The Rhyming is absolutely fantastic. I will try to review it but I'm not sure I can find anything wrong with it. Ok, first off, in ...

The idea is great! Although it needs some fine tuning. When you say, "he told me that I was the most beautiful lung woman", what do you mean by lung? ...

It took me so long to figure out your talking about a cell phone! Your very good at confusing the reader. Though it is a very well written story, I ...

This is a really nice poem! I really love the way you talk about your memories of growing up! In all honesty it is a beautiful piece! I really cant ...

One of the things I find interesting about this poem is that The topic is something I think many will be able to relate to, myself included. Though I have ...