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Re: deleted
Nice well written poem. I really enjoy The Void as a concept, and this was a very touching poem to the nature of The Void. It never really seems to ...
Apr 9, 2017 -
Re: Want to Write Grammatically Correct Dialogue?
Very interesting short here! I think it is a great way to help other writers with their grammar and writing skills. I really think that the names are quite great, ...
Apr 9, 2017 -
Re: Ascension: Corso 1 (The Myriad book 1)
Hey Feltrix! I really enjoyed reading this, (Yes! I am reading this!) and this is a good start to the beginning of a fairly long story. I really enjoy the ...
Apr 9, 2017 -
Re: Spring Sonnet
Hi! I really enjoyed this poem, and feel like it captures spring in a great way! I really enjoyed how it read and rhymed. When you say that the "May ...
Apr 8, 2017 -
Re: Pompeii
Hi! This is my first review as I am new to YWS, so anyone feel free to tell me if I am doing something wrong! I feel that this poem ...
Apr 8, 2017