Sourdude16

thanks for the input. I appreciate the help and will use the input to fix the poety. The reason the lines look the way they do is I copied this ...

Thank you for your help. I will implement some changes very soon. I plan to make the novel a glimpse back in time towards the year up to the date ...

Thank you. I will make sure to impliment those changes as soon as possible. I appreciate the help.

Thanks. As I told Veeren, this was a school project and I will edit them both together. Thanks again.

Thanks for the feed back. This was actually an assignment in my creative writing class and I appreciate this. As soon as I edit the original work I will edit ...

no prob

First thing to do is do some reviews, about same length as mine. Then, when you hit 150 points, post a new chapter. And as with making the new chapters, ...