SoundsOfSilence

Thanks for your review! 'Show, not tell'? I've never heard it put that was before. Nonetheless, thanks for pointing that out. I'll be sure to keep that in mind when ...

Thank you for the review! I won't deny there were a lot of things that inspired this. Thankfully, How To Train Your Dragon, I can assure you, was not one ...

Thanks for the review! I will definitely be fleshing out descriptions, and adding a bit more to the introduction, when I find time to finish it. I'm glad you find ...

Thanks for the review! If I'd have added another 'conversation' in that paragraph, the way I write... I dunno, it kind of would have felt redundant. I'm hoping this will ...

Thank you! I did the same thing before I had a laptop, too, and now when I'm without it I have my phone. I know, it's a smartphone, but I ...

Thanks! It will be finished (eventually) :) Our protagonist will find some friends alright ;)

Thanks! It will be finished (eventually) :) Our protagonist will find some friends alright ;)

I do, yes. I'm just slow this morning lol

Not unhelpful at all! :) Any amount of feedback is appreciated. Thanks!

Thanks for your review! I love horror, but have always had a hard time writing certain things. You were a huge help. :)

You we very helpful, thank you so much for your feedback. Horror is one of my favorite genres to work with. I just love exploring it, I feel there's just ...

Sherri is correct lol I just don't do poetry, and this will most likely be the only poem I ever publish.

Thanks for your feedback, it really was greatly appreciated! I'll be honest, I have a love-hate relationship with this piece. I enjoyed writing it, and I personally like it, but ...

Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed it! :) This was about my feelings; as explained in the piece, poetry and I don't get along.

Thank you! Writing is indeed a great outlet. I'll probably just stick to short stories, though. 'Nonsense poetry' sums this work up nicely. Poetry and I... just do not get ...