Soulkana

Well this idea seems rather unique although I must concede it was rather confusing to didn't seem to flow right somehow. But I really did like this and I get ...

Hey Rosey. I have to say I liked this. I was a bit confused but maybe that's because I haven't read anything else in the story or so. I couldn't ...

I truly loved this poem first of all. The emotion and the truth within it was very inspiring. My only problem with this is that some of the lines are ...

*PROLOUGE* It's spelled Prologue Okay so lets get something straight here. First, Were we're not real jesters, thats that's just our code name. Second, were we're a whole team of ...

I must say this confused me a little and did you mean Prologue? Epilogue comes at the end of a story not the beginning? But I think that this is ...

Wow. This was breathtaking in its tale! It captures my attention at once and I couldn't wait to find out what would happen next. My only question is: What's she ...

This was well done. It is short but tells a story strong in both emotion and understanding. I must say I'm impressed my only advice is to cap every first ...

I must say this touched me very deeply haha. I enjoyed it but was the repeating of one of those stanzas intentional? They seem to flow very nicely with it ...

Adriana!! This was very emotional and touching. The impact it implies and shows is very amazing. You make a wonderful poet ^^. I loved this. I can't really find anything ...

Hey I loved this. I can't really say anything really wrong other than add a little bit more characteristics to them? Or something haha I can't really find any faults ...

Since I haven't read any of the other chapters I might be off a little bit but to be honest I loved this chapter ^^. Still very gripping and impacting. ...

Omgosh this was soooo beautiful and inspiring!!! I just love it!! I can't find anything, anything at all I would want to change or say seems off because I can't ...

Well I like this chapter or rather...chapters lol. Well you've peeked my interest and am deciding to read the earlier ones that I can. I loved your beginning and the ...

Well I thoroughly enjoyed this poem. My only advice is shortening the lines so it flows smoother. It was rather difficult with its flow but other than that this was ...

Hey sweets!! Here to review!!! Well I must say this is much better than the first but you're still lacking in the emotional parts. Show us what they're feeling add ...