***Bold are from One Republic lyrics. Italics are thoughts***
Suddenly surprised at the clouds unity,
spread into shreds but still portraying harmony
The clouds reflect God’s notions, (or so he believed)
Was that an expression of anger?
God please don’t do that to me
Maybe to distract himself
or let this go of his memories
He turned up the stereo and
Was intent on what reeled in
I'm holding on your rope, -Got me ten feet off the ground-- I'm hearin what you say but I just can't make a sound
The emotions that followed, no better than guilt
For space alone he scavenged
On this highway and from within
Ah, the horizon’s so empty?
It didn’t matter why,
That’s where I’m driving to,
that’s where I’ll reach
You tell me that you're sorry-Didn't think I'd turn around, and say...
Hey the moon’s following
why is it chasing me?
Step on the accelerator
Just let me be!
I don’t want anyone,
no one near now.
Did God’s face just disappear off the clouds?
It’s too late to apologize, it's too late-I said it's too late to apologize, it's too late
Oh, the moon’s disappeared
the clouds have blanketed it
A crooked, sly grin, spread across his dark lips
His eyes again glowing with the life of 19
I’m happy too God didn’t I do the right thing
Assuming he’d seen a smile above him-
I loved you with a fire red- Now it's turning blue, and you say... --"Sorry" like the angel heaven let me think was you -But I'm afraid...
His bare arms now felt the cool breeze that descend
He looked to his right to find anything that helped
Sand dunes over and over again
A lonesome network tower, firmly stood there
[b]It's too late to apologize, it's too late
I said it's too late to apologize, it's too late[/i]
why can’t I get the blood stain to remove
She was lying, wasn’t she mom?
That old, cripple rude
Woman who tried to take your place
And say that you were only in my head
That you left me long ago-
No I don’t believe her!
Look at her mom, she’s trying to make me a fool
A schizophrenic’s world
and his sad reality
the mother he believed he had didn’t exist
and at the end of day
the mother who existed he simply couldn’t believe.
Points:
Time spent:
IP address:
Canary word: Present
Possible AI signals:
Original Text:
Are you sure you want to delete this comment? This cannot be undone.
Mark this comment as a review? Points will be awarded to the poster.
Your comment was posted, but it wasn’t long enough to count as a review. Reviews need about four complete sentences (at least 250 characters). Try writing another review that explains your thoughts in more detail — the author will appreciate it, and you’ll earn points for it.
140,257 Literary Works • 673,074 Reviews
Well this idea seems rather unique although I must concede it was rather confusing to understand...it didn't seem to flow right somehow. But I really did like this and I get the impression that it's really beautiful but I don't really understand it. The sad thing is I don't really know what to say to correct this. Hahah. Maybe I just got confused with the font changes...anyways I really liked this! Keep up the good works! Hope you get many helpful reviews. ^^
Soulkana<3