Soulkana

I would split the lines so they're shorter. That way the poem flows better ^^ * Report this post Supernova New postby popatemyheart1994 on Fri Apr 15, 2011 8:44 am ...

I say you should add more emotion into this. But other than that it is very good and descriptive. ^^ Hopefully you will progress very much while your here on ...

Well I read this chapter haha. Very good and I agree with lux very descriptive. I could picture this clearly. You should explain more since I was rather confused. So ...

Ohh I like this haha. Good job and very good descriptions. I could practically feel the characters thoughts and things. So good job. I'll have to read chapter one now ...

Amazing I really loved it ^^ I used to do Haikus and now I think I might try to do more. Lols used to have to do them in language ...

daannngg girl you did good. I hope your friend loves it and omg haha Boyer is my last name. *starts rolling on the floor laughing*oh the irony omg haha. Sorry ...

This made me sad. Hugs* This is very beautiful. It sorta reminds me of my own deep secret since its the same the girl here. Anyways I have been through ...

In the first part with all caps you spelled WITH wrong. XD. haha. I loved this very much. I can't find any other mistakes. I find this a very moving ...

Haha this is beautiful and simple. Yet this is most brilliant and wonderful. I hope to read more of your works later. I can not find any spelling errors or ...

Very good. i loved this and very enlightening. Sighs* I'm going to have to do homework lols. I still love this. Good job and hope to see more haha. This ...

Very beautiful!!! I really love the words and they really made me think of the one I love a lot. ^^ I also watched the video...Very nicely done. ^^ Good ...

This is a very good poem. Good luck with your poem. I hope to read more soon. This was very very moving. This also gives a very important lesson. It ...

Haha this made me laugh sooo much LOL. Good job ^^ The characters look thoroughly creative and the plot is great. I like how they interact ^^. Well Good luck ...

Amazing. I really like this a lot. Hope to read more of your work haha. Good luck and Happy Writing!!! Keep up the good writing. I can't really find anything ...

Really amazing job once again!!!! I can't wait for more!! Good job with your descriptions and of your different characters they all seem to have different personalities. Which is good. ...