Soulkana

Konnichiwa~ Ok I really absolutely loved this poem. Odd right? Usually I'm not a poetry reviewer since I just love reading them and can never say I liked this because ...

Must point out I thoroughly enjoyed this. I think your descriptions are nicely well done. I can't really point anything wrong about this. I hope you do well on it. ...

Lucy “Get up! I said get up!” she shouted at me. “I don’t want to fight you” I tried to diffuse the situation. “You should have thought about that before ...

This is well done and I really liked it because of how you worded it and all the points you pointed out. Such as its all they get is true ...

Awww this is kind of me in a way hehe. I liked it because it shows truth in its words. The one thing I don't like is the shortness of ...

I like how this turned out and must say it is an improvement from the first version. Also you need to come up with a new title to portray the ...

Hey there sis!!! Glad to see a new update!!! Anyways in the first paragraph in the sentence "You that pillar of salt....that's my wife? You left you the word See! ...

Its turning out good so far sis! Keep up the good works!! Hugs* Can't wait to read more ^^ I liked how you have put an interesting spin on the ...

Oh jeez this made me like WOAH!!! Haha Good job!! I hope you write more and keep up the good work. Truly epic I loved it. Can't wait for more ...

Really like it sis!! I'm glad I could help you just a little bit on it XD. You and your and and buts at the beginning XD. Anyways this turned ...

I really like it sis!!! Can feel the emotion in this and I totally understand the depression....Been through it too. It was beautiful and I can't wait for you to ...

I really like this poem. Truly amazing. My one point is: you start out all the same. Maybe that's my opinion but you could word the beginnings different so you ...

* Report this post Sleepless Night New postby animekaratepup on Mon May 02, 2011 2:02 pm ......I was depressed in highschool, ok? And 'm posting the stuff I've written so ...

Nice Job Nite I really like it. It made me smile because it reminds me of the circus and the hall of mirrors there. I alway got the image decribed ...

Wow this makes me want to get back into Naruto!!! Haha Amazing I meant to review your other chapters but that never workd out so Yay. I really liked this ...