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Hey xDudettex! Thanks for that, the comments were really helpful! I shall edit those mistakes! -Sop. :)

Thanks for the comment! :) Yeahh, I wanted to write about how grief and suffering is almost physical. Almost like being beaten up... The main character is going to be ...

Thanks for the reply Kay! Yeah I thought that the first idea seemed a bit more exciting. And it's fiction so I can be as creative as I like! I've ...

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Thanks for reviewing that! :) I got the inspiration simply because we where writing poems like these at school so I decided to write a collection of them. I was ...

Hey Coco, Well! I really like that idea! I'll bear in mind and see where I can go from there. I'm a creative writer so maybe I oculd use your ...

Hi Dreamy :) I'm sorry I didn't really excite you by this piece. It wasn't really something I took much time on. Anywell, as you said you can't please everyone! ...

Haha thanks Tamara, that's good enough for me!! :D

Your probably getting totally bored of me thanking you but I have to say it one more time! This piece is now a featured work so thank you! :elephant:

Thank you so much for your lovely comments! I'm thinking of writing some more of these poems with morals so I'll probably put some more on as soon as possible! ...

Thank you! :D

Thank you! Yeah I'll change that bit :? haha By the way, it's now been edited :D

Thank you for the 'likes' too! :smt002

Thanks guys for the brilliant and useful comments! Oh and Sionarama, would you mind if I changed it to 'As his head hit the floor, his last breath was puffed,' ...

Haha! You are so funny! I love this and your Tik Tok parody. First class! :mrgreen: