Sophie

Hey Somehow, before I read that they were all the same length, the exactness of the paragraphs had me memorised. Perhaps a little bit of intuition and not just boredom? ...

Hey, There's a nice use of juxtaposition in your similies. Perhaps a little more of this, a few more specifically contradictory images, would bring out the irony of your last ...

Ah Snoink. Usually when i drop in on the site I feel myself bristling with an irritating itch of some kind of anger (which I sometimes fear is actually part ...

Lmao, my god but this screams: EMO!!! Omg, get over it! It's not emo! Whoever brought that term back for a second, and thus doomed, round deserves to die. If ...

Beautiful. My eyes were literally glued to the screen. See, that's good writing. Not stories written by poor little fourteen year olds who think they're wonderful, about a girl being ...

Hmm, bit of a cliche but I like the idea. My favourtie stanza: A mesmerizing gaze A clandestine strike Is the mysterious lure Of a rose A clandestine strike sounds ...

I loved it. It was quite beautiful and it seemed to capture a lot. I particularly liked the second stanza, esp the second half. But i have to say I ...

Ooh opium.... Yeah um. Actually I really like the way it flowed. At first i thought it wouldn't flow properly, just be one of those poems you read aloud slowly ...

Aw this is really sweet. It's just.... *wants good word*. The second stanza I especially like, how the memories are stuck in the clothes, and the "can't remember whether we ...

"Love is in the air... Everywhere I look around... Love is in the air... Every sight and every sound...." "The look... of love... is in... your eyes..." "Kiss me, beneath ...

It was crude and I liked it... Not really sure why. If my mother heard it she'd cringe and say it was disgusting. If I said it to most of ...

I loved the idea, and most of the technique. Especially liked "Colour-code your causes". As soon as more than three charity wristbands were around they created like novelty ones. The ...

At first I thought "Oh god..." Then I thought "No wait, actually this ain't half bad" But in the end I felt slightly dissapointed in the way that there was ...

Yeah well.... My relationship with my father being as it is :evil: (although I'm a daughter not a son), I will say this: It's a cliche. It doesn't flow great. ...

ok, well I printed this off and I tried... I really did... but I physically could not read it. The only thing I have to say is the second character ...