Young Writers Society

Thanks

(just out of interest - what was it exactly you disagree with?)

Even though I didn't agree with the poem, I thought it was very heart-felt and it wa good how you stirred away from cliches for the most part.

Very well done.

Thanks loads
It's a pretty odd poem I must admit

Back on the topic of the poem:

I liked it. I thought I wasn't just because of the opening line, but it turned into something different than I thought it would be. And I really enjoyed it. I don't have the brain capicity right now to say anything more than that, but I'll try to come back later and give you something more constructive if you like.

Sophie is this meant to be some kind of message because I asked you to the ball?

*blushes* it's so pretty *tries to think of something smart to say* *fails*

"Love is in the air... Everywhere I look around... Love is in the air... Every sight and every sound...."

"The look... of love... is in... your eyes..."

"Kiss me, beneath the milky twilight. Lead me, out on the moonlit floor. Lift your open hand, strike up the band and make the fireflies dance. Silver moon's sparkling. So kiss me..."

"another song of the like...."

That's fine - we all get grumpy sometimes

(sorry for post-padding - couldn't resist!!)

You can say that again.

That's fine - we all get grumpy sometimes

It's okay, I understand how you feel, somedays I'm grumpy and snap at absolutley nothing.

Sorry guys - missed that part of the rules! I'll rate them from now on. Thought everyone here was 13+
you didn't offend me Twinkly Person I just get REALLY het up about stuff. Comes from strange lifestyle and coffee abuse I'm sure.

Yeah I get the rating thing now. Sorry about all that! (i'll delete if you think it's tasteless anyway?)

Pieces must be rated if they need to be. Please abide by the rules. If you don't agree with posting ratings, well...too bad. They help protect younger members, and also prevent not so tasteful pieces from appearing on the front page.

Rules - forum/viewtopic.php?t=3

Rule 1 states: 1. If you think your story/poem is inappropiate for some audiences, then leave a note indicating as such at the top of your story/poem.

The note has now been replaced by a rating system to make it easier.

Sorry if I offended you or anything, but I didn't mean that I can't deal with it. I can. I'm saying that others younger might not like the fact that there isn't any rating at all and does have a few offendable words.
And yes, I know that people are in charge of what they read, but when they click on the link to your poem, they would have liked to have a warning or something.

And isn't there a rule that it has to be rated?

-*Twinkles

That's mean! I don't want it rated!
I totally don't believe in rating stuff... I mean people are in charge of what they read... I coulda dealt with it at thirteen.


I dealt with it at ten.

She means a rating as in age guidance. I'll do it for you.

How the hell do I rate my own poem? It's not up to me whether it's good or not!

Very dramatic and it showed your feelings well.

It could have used a rating as well.