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Sorry for the late response! I started thinking about my response immediately after I read your review, but didn't have time to write it, and I suppose I must've thought ...

I see you're a very thoughtful writer! I certainly don't mind unhappy endings. In fact, two of my absolute favorite authors (Dostoyevsky and Flannery O'Connor) quite rarely have happy endings ...

PFFF---hahahahahaha! What the heck, man?

Hehe, I should've known you already had Jean-Luc's backstory all thought out.

Cool! Thanks for the specific suggestions. I think I'll be able to work those things in when I do my edit, and I'll try to find a way to make ...

Hi! Sorry I'm so late in responding, but I figure, better late than never. This is a very helpful review, but I wanted to explain some of the things that ...

Is it possible to beat Minecraft, though?

I can't wait to read Melissa's story.

I clicked on this, thinking, "Hmm...a fanfiction. A fanfiction of what, I wonder? Will I know what it is?" Then I saw the word "Daleks" in the first line. And ...

They all wear leather? Why, I hadn't noticed that! Might be a nice little detail to point out here and there. :) When you said, "Whoops, a little typo", I ...

Chapter Three is there, lol. Right after Chapter Two. Look again. Here, I think I'll rename the chapters using numerals (1,2,3, etc.) instead of writing out the numbers. Might make ...

Haha...wow, thanks...I don't know what to say. *abashed smile*

Ah, another little word inserted would help: "The green cricket WHICH (or that) Bridget Maxwell had been watching..." Of course, it should have afterward become immediately apparent that she's a ...

Aww, unfortunately, I've never played that! Sounds like just the sort of atmosphere I'd enjoy in a game, though. :)

Yay, my beige-background quotes worked! :P Better formatting achieved.