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Re: Dreams of Stars Chapter 15 (Once Upon a Time)
Thanks for the review! Fun fact: Mr. Gold does not use the word "dearie" until after the curse is broken. I remember I got chills when he first said it, ...
Mar 9, 2016 -
Re: In All That I Live For (Part 1)
Thanks, although Rachel never expected to go to Hell, since she believes her salvation is secure in Christ. Maybe I can think up something else to put there?
Mar 9, 2016 -
Re: Heartbeat Academy: plot changes
Dr. Blade wasn't murdered! *happy dance*
Mar 8, 2016 -
Re: Dreams of Stars Chapter 14 (Once Upon a Time)
Thanks for the review. If you like the story, feel free to go back and read from the beginning. You don't have to worry about writing a review for every ...
Mar 6, 2016 -
Re: Dreams of Stars Chapter 13 (Once Upon a Time)
Sorry I'm late in the reply. Thanks for the reviews! I'm not sure what you mean by the first paragraph, since that's what the story says: that Bridget DOES know ...
Mar 6, 2016 -
Re: Dreams of Stars Chapter 14 (Once Upon a Time)
Oh my goodness, thank you. You're a wonderful reviewer. Your criticism was helpful and didn't feel like you were beating me down, and you also seemed to really appreciate and ...
Mar 3, 2016 -
Re: Dreams of Stars Chapter 24 (Once Upon a Time)
Thanks a lot! I appreciate the rephrasing suggestions. :) They do seem better to me.
Feb 29, 2016 -
Re: Heartbeat Academy: Chapter 36
No way. ):(
Feb 28, 2016 -
Re: Heartbeat Academy: Chapter 34
So Toby's character is evolving! Wonderful. I think, if I was reading this all in succession without pausing so long between each chapters, I might have seen that more clearly. ...
Feb 28, 2016 -
Re: Holy Breath
This is a wonderful description of the "hole that needs to be filled with a God-shaped peg" that all our youth group leaders clumsily attempt to describe. It drags us ...
Feb 28, 2016 -
Re: Dreams of Stars Chapter 6 (Once Upon a Time)
They should say "Bye" to the mill! *squee* :D Thanks for the reviews!
Feb 28, 2016 -
Re: Dreams of Stars Chapter 5 (Once Upon a Time)
Thanks, Lareine. Seeing I got a review from you made me cheer up after a really horrible work shift. It was a good review, too. Thank you.
Feb 28, 2016 -
Re: Heartbeat Academy: Chapter 33
Weh. Accidentally posting that review had worse consequences than I thought. Since I'd already posted a review here, I didn't get any points for this one. :/ Oh well, my ...
Feb 24, 2016 -
Re: Heartbeat Academy: Chapter 33
Hey, I'm here to finish this chapter and my review. :P Chelsea said nothing as we neared the heart-twisting fountain, Wow, I love how you reminded us of that fountain ...
Feb 24, 2016 -
Re: Heartbeat Academy: Chapter 33
Nooo! I accidentally hit "submit" when I was trying to paste something in! Er, I'll write the rest of my review later because I have to go now. I was ...
Feb 22, 2016
