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  • Novel / Chapter » Fanfiction, Fantasy Re: Dreams of Stars Chapter 15 (Once Upon a Time)

    Thanks for the review! Fun fact: Mr. Gold does not use the word "dearie" until after the curse is broken. I remember I got chills when he first said it, ...

    Mar 9, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Spiritual Re: In All That I Live For (Part 1)

    Thanks, although Rachel never expected to go to Hell, since she believes her salvation is secure in Christ. Maybe I can think up something else to put there?

    Mar 9, 2016
  • Article / Essay » Review, General Re: Heartbeat Academy: plot changes

    Dr. Blade wasn't murdered! *happy dance*

    Mar 8, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Fanfiction, Fantasy Re: Dreams of Stars Chapter 14 (Once Upon a Time)

    Thanks for the review. If you like the story, feel free to go back and read from the beginning. You don't have to worry about writing a review for every ...

    Mar 6, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Fanfiction, Fantasy Re: Dreams of Stars Chapter 13 (Once Upon a Time)

    Sorry I'm late in the reply. Thanks for the reviews! I'm not sure what you mean by the first paragraph, since that's what the story says: that Bridget DOES know ...

    Mar 6, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Fanfiction, Fantasy Re: Dreams of Stars Chapter 14 (Once Upon a Time)

    Oh my goodness, thank you. You're a wonderful reviewer. Your criticism was helpful and didn't feel like you were beating me down, and you also seemed to really appreciate and ...

    Mar 3, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Fanfiction, Fantasy Re: Dreams of Stars Chapter 24 (Once Upon a Time)

    Thanks a lot! I appreciate the rephrasing suggestions. :) They do seem better to me.

    Feb 29, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Realistic Re: Heartbeat Academy: Chapter 36

    No way. ):(

    Feb 28, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Realistic Re: Heartbeat Academy: Chapter 34

    So Toby's character is evolving! Wonderful. I think, if I was reading this all in succession without pausing so long between each chapters, I might have seen that more clearly. ...

    Feb 28, 2016
  • Short Story » Spiritual, Dramatic Re: Holy Breath

    This is a wonderful description of the "hole that needs to be filled with a God-shaped peg" that all our youth group leaders clumsily attempt to describe. It drags us ...

    Feb 28, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Fanfiction, Fantasy Re: Dreams of Stars Chapter 6 (Once Upon a Time)

    They should say "Bye" to the mill! *squee* :D Thanks for the reviews!

    Feb 28, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Fanfiction, Fantasy Re: Dreams of Stars Chapter 5 (Once Upon a Time)

    Thanks, Lareine. Seeing I got a review from you made me cheer up after a really horrible work shift. It was a good review, too. Thank you.

    Feb 28, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Realistic Re: Heartbeat Academy: Chapter 33

    Weh. Accidentally posting that review had worse consequences than I thought. Since I'd already posted a review here, I didn't get any points for this one. :/ Oh well, my ...

    Feb 24, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Realistic Re: Heartbeat Academy: Chapter 33

    Hey, I'm here to finish this chapter and my review. :P Chelsea said nothing as we neared the heart-twisting fountain, Wow, I love how you reminded us of that fountain ...

    Feb 24, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Realistic Re: Heartbeat Academy: Chapter 33

    Nooo! I accidentally hit "submit" when I was trying to paste something in! Er, I'll write the rest of my review later because I have to go now. I was ...

    Feb 22, 2016


You are not the voice in your mind, but the one who is aware of it.
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